i loved it now im going to add it to my favorites list

I love this fanfic and it is so sweet.

While there were like 10-15 typos and missing words, it was still readable. Aside from that i really enjoyed reading this. I liked the premise of it but i don't quite like the epilogue. I just don't like how Hinata's dad/clan dealt with it. I don't think the clan would kick her out or that her father would go to naruto for help, but that's more of a personality/politics type problem that doesn't really need to be covered in a one-shot lemon fic.
So overall, 9.5/10 :)

Excellent One-shot. I would love to see this continued as a full story but it is also good as is.

I liked it and it was pretty good

Wow, another great piece of work by you. I'm not so sure about the fox features as I'm not the greatest furry fan but the hey, it made for a good read and original idea.

I say you do a fic where they both get fox-ed.

i dont review very often but i quite enjoyed this one shot, i'd love to find more fan-fics with simuler plots but it doesnt seam to come up much

i love it

Awesome Story!

foxy love...LOL

Oohh-hoo-hoo-hoo-hoo *Perverted giggle/squeel* hehehehehe, please do write more, i definitely like hina-chan all foxed out, though i think naru should go all foxy with her and we'd have a pair of horny, animalistic kitsunes, ne? *maniacal hand-gestures* hehehehe wouldn't that be great *has widest most perverted wolfish grin known to man* heheheehehehehee i definitely am gonna read that last one you got, especially if there's more foxy bits of the two of them, hehehehe bacon... sorry but i seriously need to get my fox now, this stuff is getting me all excited and i should pay attention to my own fox once in a while *rubs hands together with evil wolfy grin* hehehehehehehehee, bacon!

till next *perverted grin* Sayounara, Stunt-sama

*stalks off to find a certain blue fox*

-Ikasury

I liked your story alot but i think lemons aren't allowed on

I would suggest either editing your story or moving your story to a new site (the only one i can think of is

I won't report you for this but I suggest you at least make sure you have a copy on your computer as a backup in case you're reported.

good story i think you should create one that combines these two maybe call it the love of two monsters i dont know just doesnt seem right that one is turned into a kitsune while the other isnt

hey great story