hi, hi. I'm not sure that was your goal but it makes me laugh, like Pakennarion.

I had never think about something like that. And I like your OS

Meÿli.

hi, i like this so far need more

I'm sorry, this just makes me laugh. I don't know why but I really liked the line, "look under the bed for the Under-the-bed-thing" It's just really funny for some reason. But then again it's really late and I'm really tired. But anyway I liked this oneshot, it's an interesting idea of Chris' motives and such. _ Thanks for unintentionally making me laugh.

I like it, it's extremely realistic.

I really liked it. Sad and interesting at the same time. It leaves me waiting for more, but is also great like this, saying a lot in only one chapter.

I love this story. I think you should continue it instead of leaving it as it is.

good story, would be cool if you would continue this

aww poor chris, good one-shot! D

hi, need more

Very promising plot. Can't wait to see more.

I love it, besides the whole Chris being cheathed on thing, but it's really good!