Very nice piece. I really enjoy these. The Harmony was brilliant and there are a bunch of girls who shall soon face the combined wrath of Harry, for hurting his love, and the epicly vindictive Hermione, for daring to make her doubt herself and her Harry. I think the final scene gave it that little extra punch, so good on you for that. The whole thing was really good.

Absolutely beautifulEasily playable in canon. Harry has always found Hermione beautiful, since the beginning.

I love it! Unlike the stereotypical Hinny,or Romione, this one is actually the one for me!

amazing story
loved it

awwwwwww...Harry is so sweet. I think a part about Hermione facing Ginny, Lavendar, and Parvati would be nice too :D

That was one of the best stories of Harry showing Hermione that she is beautiful I've read. Well done.

D. Page Robin

Loved it so sweet

Wonderful story.

But I think you need to write a sequel to this where Harry puts the girls who insulted Hermione in their place, and lets them know that if they even THINK about breaking Hermione's heart again like they nearly did here, he will unleash Hell itself upon them.

A good story, I enjoyed it. But the three girls ganging up on Hermione dosn't ring true. Ginny is a year younger than the 'gossip queens', so different dorms. I can see Ginny being bitter and vindictive because she was raised on a lifetime of HARRY POTTER stories and books. Then Harry recues her in her first year at Hogwarts (Living up to her story-book hero.) So of course, in her mind, it was ment to be. Lavender and Parvati, on the other hand, are in the same year as Harry and hooked into the rumor mill as 'gossip queens' so they 'know' all about Harry's romantic mishaps over the years. They could take advantige of this because Harry dosn't pay them any attenion. The three together have nothing in commen to gang up on Hermione.

Merlin, it was sweet, erotic and passionate, all packed in one. harry and hermione all the way

Brilliant! This is my favourite H/Hr story. It's so touching, and sensual, and loving... And it's quite close to home to me. My first serious girlfriend had similar insecurities and I've done something similar with her, tough I've chipped down her insecurities bit by bit instead of the method Harry used. However Harry and Hermione both knew each other for a long time and trust each other unconditionally so it was really believable. Simply Beautiful. Congratulations

Hi Michelle!

Brilliant. I loved it.

I really like how you put in that protruding ribs and hipbones don't make a girl beautiful - I have neither and feel more beautiful after reading this.

Now if only I could find my Harry...

:)

Love,

Avalon

make another chapter about Hermione's revenge against the girls or just something this is to good to past up i loved it

Great job!

I've read this story before and I loved it then as much as now.

Thought I'd left a review but found out I hadn't. Sorry about that.

Anyway, thanks for writing and sharing your "beautiful" story with us.