Beautiful tragedy.

I found the last part very touching. The whole 'who did I want to fight for? Who did I want to protect?'

It Vexen, not Namine? Hmm...

I liked the story very much. Replica needs more love.

Very angsty and beautiful, but I still cracked up when I read the line about explaining sandwiches.

I really, really enjoyed reading this fan-fiction. It's an interesting angle on a rarely-used subject. Well done.

That was awesome and at times very sweet~ _

Wah!

That's an interesting way to portray the relationship between Vexen and the Replica sort of like a Father-Son bond. In the manga, Repliku insults Larxene about her age and she takes him, without Vexen's consent as far as I can see, and forces Namine to rewrite his memories. Vexen had no say and no choice in the matter, and from the scans I have sen tried to stop Larxene or something, but I won't know till I read the whole manga.

Nice Ending!

Wonderful story.

They all seemed to be in character throughout the story, Kudos!

But yeah, nicely written, a bit of a sad ending as well.

x3 Keep up the magnificent work!

Aw. :( Sad, but good. It was kinda cute how the Riku Replica wanted to protect his creator, kinda like a doggy. X3 Plus, for once, Vexen's not a psychotic pedophile. And you only had like, two grammar/spelling mistakes, which I thought was impossible in such a long story. Well done, indeed.

Wow that was so beautiful... I loved it!

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*bliss*

Touching... but Filial Piety?

That was...very sad...

Well done. I feel sad for both of them, Vexen for having to betray his 'son' and Riku replica for...well...everything. Very well done.