Atonishing.

As for Naruto I would say that he is borderline Bipolar.

From where I'm ? Sasuke has schizophrenia .

And that's the big question, isn't it ?

He's insane .

I'm confused, what happen exactly ?

Interesting

Realmente no sé porque me siento tan molesta por haber leido esto, ¿será porqué hasta llegue a llorar? Me encantaron todas las emociones que me provocaste con esta historia, pero si me molestó un poco el cambio drástico que le diste al personaje de sasuke, pareciera como si todo lo que llegó ser Naruto en su serie real, lo quisieras cambiar los papeles al final, digamos sono mas como una leccion para sasuke, también sentí que todo fue un capricho de naruto, lo cual considero muy egoista, primero hace lo posible para conquistarlo despues se da cuenta que no es lo realmente quería, nunca negó cuando Sasuke le reprochaba que tenia cara de repugnancia cuando estaban casi en la intimidad, fueron muchas cosas que quebraron mi corazón, pero si te felicito por la excelente redacción, y también la historia, apesar de muchos disgustos al prestarle mas atencion es genial al final de, cuentas.

Two hundred and fifty thousand words. I dragged myself through 250000 words of their angst and waffling and nonsensical decision-making, and it ends on this? To stay in a place he hates with people he hates for a person he hates half the time? Sasuke's resolution to force himself on someone who doesn't want him? (Attraction does not a happy future make, after all. You can love someone and not want to be with them.)

This is not an ending. It is the delusion of someone who can't seem to make a rational decision to save his life. And even if the character is resolved, the plot is not. Kabuto is still at large. Sasuke is still in his probationary genin phase. We never found out exactly what happened with Itachi.

Honestly, it sounds like you got tired of writing this and decided to wrap it up as best you could and be done with it. If that's the case, a note at the beginning would be nice. For people who don't like open-ended endings.

Is there a reason everyone's breath stinks? Sour breath is not a turn on.

Mm, feeling each other up in the middle of the training ground. So classy.

I get that they're inevitable and all, but I really don't like Naruto's whole non-con, "no means yes" attitude. Sexual harassment and assault are not going to help the situation he's in, nor are they attractive traits.

Pleaseeee tell me they ended up together. Like what the hell? This story was amazing but what about NaruSasu!

i see now how many people have urged you to write a sequel. I know you're not on here anymore but if you ever, for some reason, read these reviews again on a day of boredom, know that i love the fact that you never wrote a second part to this. It's enough as it is. The story can hold itself up and made sure my attention was with it the entire time, and the ending leaves you with questions, sure, but so many answers too, and hopes for their future. It's fine the way it is. Thank you again.

this is fucking amazing. The writing, the characterisation. The way you described Sasuke when depressed felt so real i had to check if i myself was still breathing every couple of seconds. Thank you for writing and finishing this, even though it made me stay up way too late more than once;) xoxokiwi.