Reviews for Seras 2066 |
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Ger0nim0 chapter 17 . 5/2 Awesome, adorable, gruesome, and hilarious. It's too bad that this story is dead. |
Kurama38 chapter 49 . 11/9/2017 You have got to come back and finish this story; its a really good Hellsing fic. |
XsnakesforeverX chapter 49 . 8/15/2017 Would love to see this continued. Really is very good story |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2017 Really good he'll sing story. I always appreciate a FanFiction with original plot. Admittedly the spelling and grammar has made it a little hard to read, but past that it is a very good Hellsing fanfic. I really love the "mindscape" Seras has developed within her head, along with the conflicts that arise from holding all those good and evil souls. Definitely a ton of potential within that idea alone. The one part that I was rather disappointed in was the implication of rape to a crippled integra. It was kind of unnecessary and came across as primarily shock value rather than a stepping stone for the actual plot. Since technically it was incorporated into later chapters perhaps you could use that as present tension between the allies and Alucard. Just a thought (I usually won't read an explicit story unless it is strongly incorporated and adding into the plot, because otherwise 'why use it?'). I noticed that some of the reviewers are really per-pieved about your grammar. Though from what I have seen, it appears you are trying to focus more on the story itself by letting your ideas come first, which is totally badass. I understand it has been over 4 years since this fix has been updated, and you will probably never read this comment, but I believe you have something pretty cool going on here and I frulh think this story still has enough meat, blood, and bones to give to the fandom. Anyway, just my humble review. Hope you are having a good day! Write on... |
rc48177 chapter 18 . 10/4/2015 Hey! It isn't soccer it's Football. No self respecting Englishwoman would call it Soccer. |
310 chapter 14 . 9/20/2015 I can't read this. You have a good story and plot, but your writing is extremely sub-par. I'd give your story a 7 but your writing rates a 2 at best. You have grammar and spelling errors. You writing doesn't flow smoothly. You transition from one idea to the next without properly transitioning. So, unfortunately, I have to stop reading. |
shugokage chapter 49 . 2/13/2015 A truly impressive Hellsing story! |
kinigget chapter 49 . 11/19/2014 aw, come on! you can't quit here! Not after introducing Millenium! well, in any case, I sincerely hope that this project has not been abandoned, and look forward to any future updates. |
kinigget chapter 44 . 11/19/2014 that was indeed a very long chapter, but it was a lot of fun. Plus, I've read longer |
kinigget chapter 38 . 11/19/2014 drunk Seras is best Seras also: what |
kinigget chapter 33 . 11/19/2014 I thought so |
kinigget chapter 30 . 11/19/2014 a reunion for the ages |
kinigget chapter 27 . 11/19/2014 oh this is going to be *fun* |
kinigget chapter 26 . 11/19/2014 I still can't get a sense of where this story is going to end up, but I have high hopes |
kinigget chapter 22 . 11/19/2014 oh Richard you poor dumb bastard... |