I know it’s been a whole ass year but like... you should update.i love this and It’s so close to the end!

This story is sooo interesting and you write beautifully! Thanks for sharing your work with us. I really hope you'll complete it some day. A bientot hopefully

I half expect this to end very badly for Tifa. But I’ll wait to see what’s in store!

It's taken quite a while to get to this point, I'll say. Very excited to see all the cards on the table. Please keep updating! Don't stop now.

A curious thing, giving Velrog a deeper meaning to be so invested in the war. I'm interested in seeing where this goes. Keep up the great work.

Glad to see continuing the story. Keep up the great work. Excited to see it's conclusion.

Is Velrog going to tell her his side of the story? Things are finally teeing up to a conclusion. When you say mech I think Gundam lol.

I know all this build up will pay off. I just can’t wait for the BIG things to happen next!

Dude. Spell-check. Use it. Also, double check your work. Many sentences make no sense , and are grammatically incorrect. You seem to like to pepper in big words, but don't know exactly how to use them.

i started reading this when you began it, way back when. i fell off the ffnet radar and was happy to see that you are still working on this piece. i liked the twist. i have to say i saw it coming, but that's not because you didn't surprise me, but that i know how your writing can be from past stories.

being home sick allowed me to relax and read this again. kudos to you! there are times where words that were used weren't correct, but i knew what you were saying and it didn't detract from the story whatsoever.

excited to see what you have planned for the upcoming chapters. well done again!
and while i wish Tifa had a bit more of a backbone... i'm hoping to see some of her spunk come out during the execution.

Execution time ! Can’t wait to see how this is going down! Thank you for the update!

When I first started reading this, it seemed interesting. But I feel like the relationship wasn’t developing or going anywhere. They had no romantic encounters, all the relationship was about Sepiroth hurting Tifa, and she constantly forgiving him. How can you instantly go from hating a person who kills your people and treat you horribly to loving them, and instantly giving them your virginity. Sepiroth never once gave indication that he loves her. I only think he sees her as a fuck toy. She could’ve been free now that he’s dying. I don’t see this as a healthy relationship, all I see is a girl obsessed with a guy. Also “pacifist” and “pacifism” was constantly mentioned. It was repetitive, and you kept mentioning how she was a pacifist and caring. Tifa seems out of character, always screaming about something, I see her as one to hold her pain and be a mother to the Avalanche crew. But here all I see is a weak willl girl controlled by lust. We(I) don’t know of Sepiroth’s feeling for her, if he does have feelings then they’re not implied enough.

Seems like she's developing Stockholm syndrom to Sepi...

Love love, but my dumbass self had to look up every word that came up. I’m glad to say my vocabulary had increase tremendously.

IT IS TOO SHORT!
Damn the plot twist is killing me... I got a hunch already but still!
And I don't know why but with the fact that Sephiroth is a Red Heart was out of closet (no pun intended) now just bring my angst meter rocketing to the moon (again, no pun intended). I feel sorry for Tifa but I have the guts she won't have the future she wished for..