Reviews for SunKissed Flakes |
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Jealous Jack chapter 16 . 11/30/2015 Awwww where's the rest? This is the biggest hangcliffer ever! |
Guest chapter 11 . 10/5/2015 Ed likes milk... Someone HAS to draw Ed as a little kid clutching Roy's leg, making an adorable terrified face whispering "Monsta..." |
Guest chapter 6 . 10/4/2015 aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww... |
DraconoBlade chapter 16 . 9/7/2013 I really wish that it was finished... Maybe you could finish it one day? That would make me so happy. But I understand that as a writer, sometimes leaving things unfinished forever is perfectly normal. But, who knows? Maybe you'll look back on this story one day and think 'Hey, I should finish this.' Anyways, great story, I really love it! |
PollenPawprints chapter 16 . 4/13/2013 Awww! Thhis whole story has been one fluffy ball of kawaii! I LOVE it! |
LeFay Strent chapter 6 . 1/31/2013 Hm, I suppose some people would think Riza was being almost bitchy towards Ed, but I can kinda see where she's coming from. She's always been protective of Roy, and now she sees him using this new Ed as a substitute for the old one and he's become quickly attached to him to. I can see where she's coming from. This is a nice little story you've got here. The only thing it's lacking is description. Sometimes I can't tell where the scene is taking place because you haven't really explained where they're at or what the area looks like. Also, I'm a little confused about how Ed looks. At first i thought he was a straight up kitten. But then everyone who sees him seems to immediately recognize that its him or that he's a chimera. So does he have some humanistic features or something? Anyway, I really like the way you write him and Roy together. They're too cute. X3 |
TheQueenOfScouts chapter 16 . 6/15/2012 Interesting story, I hope you'll continue it someday. :3 |
Violent Solution chapter 3 . 9/15/2011 d'aaawwwwwwwwwwwwww |
letmeupme chapter 1 . 11/8/2010 I hope to post a fuller review one day, but I just wanted to say that this fic is wonderful. The atmosphere, the settings of the fic are well laid, the feel is very different from the original; a good thing in this case. Subtle, stark, warm, and surreal in a way that feels real. Thank you for writing and posting 'Sunkissed Flakes' |
VioletIsInPain chapter 3 . 2/24/2010 i love this story! its very...CUTE! |
love-peace-music chapter 2 . 6/29/2009 im not quite sure i understand this,is Edward a kitten or a half kitten/half boy? |
lilsammywinchester chapter 16 . 1/2/2009 i think this story is so cute! 3 er i didn't really understand the little short thing u left though (and i feel like so slow lol it took me a while to figure out that Ed wasn't a normal kitten in the beginning xD) well this fanfic is cute and i hope u continue it! D |
deadforever chapter 16 . 8/16/2008 Me: Oh goodness...you updated! O.O; Lust: ...whooptie-friggin'-doo. Wrath: _' Is it just me...or is somebody starting their PMS a little too early? Lust: *glare*... Envy: Watch it, she bites. *smirks* Wrath: ...hunh? Envy:... Me: ALL OF YOU SHUT UP! *glares at the sins* How come everytime I review this story, all of you guys wanna take over on my computer? Greed: *shrug* Beats me. Sloth: Actually, all of us are tired of hearing Envy griping and complaining about stupid fangirls, annoying nicknames, and hardly ever being used in fanfics unless it's a b/l story or something yaoi-ish. It's quite halarious, considering the fact that Envy isn't gay. Envy: DAMN STRAIGHT! T_T; Wrath: *smirks* who's the one PMSing now? Envy: *points* SHUTTUP! Me: *sniggers* ...anyways, what I've been meaning to say is that I'm glad you were able to update, even if the chapter was incredibly short. o_o' I was actually a little disappointed when I found that it was super-duper short, because I wanted to read more chapters from the awesome writer, Momma Mustang! I'm not sure if I added you to my author's or story(ies) alert list yet, but I think I'm going to now. Keep writing!~ Envy: *is reading chapter*...dammit. There's still nothing about me in here. Greed: ... Lust: .. Wrath: Look's like someone has a really big ego. XD Envy: ... Me: ..? Envy:. ... *shifty eyes* _ Me: *gasp* OMGAWSH! YOU DON'T HAVE ANY GOOD COMEBACKS FOR THIS ONE, DON'TCHU! O_O Envy: ...*sulks and leaves computer*...shut up, bitch. |
michelle chapter 16 . 8/9/2008 i love the story its really cute! is the last chapter so posed to a flash back before he meet roy or is it where you left off on? anyway good work! your really good i love the story a lot and ed is so cute and every thing keep up the good and update soon;) |
mrawgirl09 chapter 16 . 7/18/2008 like, oh my god. tanks so much for the reply, although i have no idea what you were talking about, and now i have to reread it all over again! but i don't really mind, cause the first chap, with the title, is burned in my mind! i really, REALLY loved the box kitty, and i'm sure i'll always remeber it! u tata! |