I'm reading this story for maybe the tenth time, and I still love it.

After ending with Xemnas dirty trick I missed the significance of Axel eating with Riku. Before this he only ate with gusto with Larxene. I don't think he even ate a lot with Demyx and Roxas. We knew it would happen but what a wonderful way to solidify the way Axel's feelings have grown. Just another of your many details, large and small, that deepen the characters and enrich the story

I don't usually comment on the writing of authors that haven't written in a few years. I just assume they've lost interest or moved on. But your story is so unique, so powerful, such a good read that I just have to tell you how much I loved it. It's a great story. I laughed I cried I ached for Axel and Riku and Larxene. And in the end I smiled even though I had tears in my eyes. Its true that you really need a good beta, but you are a great writer. Thank you.

This was wierd.

I'm just gonna pretend everything is okay.

I can't handle this.

I feel really bad for Riku.

Please don't let Riku die.

I don't like this, it's sad. And I think Larxene is pregnant.

This chapter made me feel depressed. I loved it.

That last phrase slayed me.

I absolutely love how different thus story is than the average kh story.

Finally! !

Ugh! Why do you do this?

I really honestly loved this chapter!

I wonder how Larxene knows Riku.