great story..loved the end

Great work i really enjoyed it :D

its so cute love this story , read it in 20 min straight!

cant wait for more , especially with little rachel...so cute

this is great but i wish it had of been longer. i would have liked to seen the trails mike went through in prison, if any of the other got caught again and how they would react to each other being in the same prsion and so on.

but it's still a great story and very well written.

thanks:-)

Hey! It's me again. Just wanted to say (again), GREAT STORY.

It's really sweet. Hope you make more stories in the future...

Ow, that was really sweet. It's a good thing Michael did, telling Sara he couldn't bring their little girl to the prison. Not sure if I would've been able to. Wow. Five years and then meeting your daughter...the poor chap must've been nervous as hell...You described it perfectly. Thanks! XO

I love it. Please update soon!

that was so great! I am so excited about this story! It is so great!

Wow. When you said you'd update, I didn't think you meant 'update 4 chapters at once'! LOL. I'm glad you did, though. You had me worrying there for a bit when I saw the words 'fifteen years', but - thank you - you shortened it again. Now, Bring SARA to him, damn it! XO

that was so great! please continue soon!

She'll stay...kiss him...hug him tight and never let him go. Right? Of course! Now settle that cliffy soon! I'm waiting anxiously!

XO

Great stuff man! Real good writing from ya...

Cannot wait 'til the next chapter!

THanks for writing!

Aww love it!

Can't wait to see what happens.