Reviews for All The Small Things
legalronin chapter 21 . 7/28/2016
This is great. Saitou listing things that make him happy but the best part is "he loves her but that doesn't mean she's safe from his sense of humor." That admission made my heart melt. I know life gets in the way, but we miss you.
Meiyo no Ko chapter 36 . 8/1/2013
Love. This. So. MUCH.
legalronin chapter 33 . 11/7/2012
I find myself rereading your stories quite often and All the Small Things makes for a perfect read when I only a few minutes to spare. I love the back and forth that is Saitou and Tokio's relationship. I also want to smack them for being so oblivious to each other. I think the game with the receipts is super sweet, maybe because it reminds me of me and my man friend...except I doodle on scraps of paper and he throws out suggestions.
ScarletLeaves chapter 36 . 4/18/2012
I just cant stp reading you awesome stories. I was wondering if you can do another chapter, I was reading CM and on chapter 32 i think, its when Tokio was helping Saitou with the funeral preperationa nd it mentions that she disappeared a whole month and well knowing him he was freaking out, so i was wondering maybe you can do a chapter about that, I've been playing it in my head and you do a wonderful job with his character so i thought i would ask, thank you :D
nessie6 chapter 17 . 8/9/2009
From the way Saitou talks abou thow his father is in Cap Mis, and from this chapter, he really reminds me of Isshin Kurosaki. Much more to him than a goofy, fight-loving, oblivious man.

~nessie~
Leila Winters chapter 33 . 12/1/2008
T_T Oh man. I only intended to read one chapter because I have a lot of schoolwork awaiting me...but your stories are seriously like crack. I just keep coming back for more.

"Momento" is wonderfully poignant for such a short piece. I really feel for Saitou here. Their uneasy relationship is portrayed so well (believably so, despite most people catching on a little sooner than 7 years).

Just had to say something about it...
Leila Winters chapter 32 . 12/1/2008
Ah sigh. I love this. XD

Tokio's starting to remind me a bit of myself...which is entirely obnoxious of me to say, but the way she won't ever admit to weakness (ie: secretly coveting the tiny crane and letting him think she'd been petty about it) and being insanely driven to compete with every smug smirk on her competitor's face...yeah. Totally right there with her every step of the way.

Nice work.
anreg chapter 36 . 11/28/2008
Thank you for such a delightful Thanksgiving treat! It was fun reading these. Leave it to him to bring out her competitive streak with the cranes. I loved it when he saw she'd kept something he drew for her in her wallet for 5 years. Number 9 on her list of 10 was great. Finally dawns on her that she is the one on whom he focuses his attention. Thanks again for a great read!
Onhiro chapter 36 . 11/28/2008
This was great! Long time no read, by the way, glad to see you're back. Any Captain Miserable on the horizon? Hopefully so, I really love your writing. You get Saito so perfectly that it's almost creepy...

KEEP ON WRITING!
tcl7189 chapter 36 . 11/27/2008
Loved them all! Glad to see some new stuff
tcl7189 chapter 31 . 5/29/2008
OMG! ROFLMAO! Love this stuff!
Vanilla Cinnamon chapter 31 . 5/12/2008
This chapter is just freaking hilarious. I love it, and while I was merely giggling for the majority of it, noticing the chapter title as I was preparing to hit the review button sent me into hysterical laughter.
anreg chapter 31 . 5/11/2008
Thank you for another gem! I love it. It was really neat to see the interaction between the wolf and his mom.

Reading it was the perfect way to end my Mother's Day!
anreg chapter 30 . 2/10/2008
Chapter 28: If only Saitou knew *who* he had to thank for destroying Tokio's relationship with the defense attorney! Dad to the rescue. Of course, it is only Saitou who refuses to be intimidated by the old cop.

Chapter 29: Chivalry is not dead! It was nice to see him defend her honor. Found your note about 'Christmas Cake' very interesting.

Chapter 30: Tokio is finally falling for the wolf 'big time' and almost admitting it to herself. Loved this line: "So Tokio resigned herself to a life of dating men who weren’t Saitou and then subconsciously punishing them for it."

Thanks again for some wonderful reading. These never cease to amuse me!
darkokita chapter 29 . 2/9/2008
Good for Saitou-san! How dare D-head make assumptions like that about our Tokio!
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