Uwaaahh that line of "I lost my virginity before I had my first kiss" really did a good job! Hillarious!

Hehe.. Me likey the lemoney!

Wow for your first AkuRoku you made this story very... Err enjoyable I guess would be the word for it lol

that utterly hot and sexy!x3 wonderful job!

is it possible that axel's...thing can be THAT big! o.o

You should totally write an indirect sequel, if ONLY because I demand such.

I like it, I love how Axel is a total slut- well, not really a total slut, but whatever. Anyway, it's a good story. :D

awesome story.i dont mind a mindless yaoi every now and it was really awesome person

I loved it ,

very intimate.

One word:

Amazing.

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No, really, though.

I think if you did a multi-chapter with a similar theme about the boarding home thing and Axel and Roxas but not jumping right into hot, sweaty mansex, it would be even more amazing. :'D

loved yaoi fangirl spirit almost got loose(She loves yaoi so much its scary.I even scare myself)when Axel called Roxas 'baby'.This story made me fell al happy yay.

woot! mindless yaoi! my favorite kind! lol I like this alot!

Aww! That was so funny and cute and sweet. Loved it!

lmfao that last line was fucking priceless XD wow that was good i loved it!

*dies of laughter* that was grand deary, verry clever indeed good job! _

Oh great fic! Ya know it's weird, I was painting my sister's toes before I read this fic, no lie! Well this is diferrent, never heard of losing your virginity before getting your first kiss, congrats for coming up with it! No way this was your first KH fic, it was so damn good! Really you did great, and I incourage you to continue writing more, you know this would be a great chappy fic! Well talk to ya later! (::)'s

-Riku-stalker

dude...that was smutty. haha i just stated the obvious. YUMMY. PLEASE keep writing. XOXOXOX