Very good, bravo. I look forward to reading the rest. Everyone is very much in character - the only thing out of place was the quickness with which Rachel apologized to Ax. Other than that, excellent start. Happy writing!

that was most likely the absoulate best story i've ever read. and i'm not doing the ! and all capital letters b/c to me, it shows less meaning, and this is truely exceptional

That was so good! Even though the animorphs didn't win earth it was awesome! I liked how you caputured Ax's feelings coming back to the home world.

Wow...that's all I can say. Wow. You have an amazing ability to write, and it had a nice flowing motion as well. Bravo!

You know, Im not even an animrphs fan, but...that was absolutely a beautiful plot ...I love the way you introduced the whole situation...u really should consider professional writing...man, my novella doesnt hold a candle to this ( even thought its orignal.) I just...i dont know what to say

your ending was way better than what K.A Applegate wrote! She basically ruined the whole series!*ARGH* but if YOU wrote the stories that whould be way better!

I read this pre-54 on uhahrapters site. I loved it then, i love it now.

*Sniff sniff*

that was REALLY good! i loved the plot, and i could really get into the story. you're a very talented writer

Great story...

that was great! nice job!

WOW! Are you going to add more?

I finally ventured out of the Potter realm and into the other categories of books that I love. Animorphs being right at the top. Let me just say that this fic is the most well written, realistic, and awesome that I have read for Animorphs this far! Fantastic, fantastic job! It would be very interesting for you to write a sequel, with all of them going back to Earth to liberate it. It's gonna take stories like this one to keep Animorphs alive after the series ends in a few months. Kudos! and KEEP WRITING!

~Orca

I like the way you showed all of the Animorphs' emtions. ITs pretty good.