Bitch naruto

damnit. the story is great and you don't finish the story.

I like the way this fic is going. keep up good work my friend. also I like the idea of giving Naruto the ability of the fullbring, because I have read a lot of Naruto fics including bleach X-overs and most of the x-overs I have read give Naruto the powers of a soul reaper, hollow, or a quincy, I also like the originality of the idea you have come up with and will be faving and following you so as said earlier keep up the good work and good luck to you in any future endeavors you go into in the future.

And why would danzo want that? That would only WEAKEN the entire village, and that has NEVER been his idea, ever, yes he WOULD like to control naruto, but to eliminate him? That has NEVER been part of the equation. He KNOWS he can't, not if he wants konoha on top! (which he does), they DO NOT need a proven traitor (sasuke) so HE can be put to death with no problems. VERY different, IF he was made aware that naruto was the child of prophecy and the son of those two, then ALL the more reason to keep him stupidly powerful AND safe at ALL costs, because that would mean that destiny ITSELF was on konoha's(thus his, in his own warped mind) side.(as long as the village still had the child of prophecy).

Hai means yes, not hello

this is lame as fuck

Include ino and temari in the harem gaaras reaction to temari being a part of narutos reaction would be just hilarious

Hope you retain hinata... And keep Sakura with sasuke- you don't seem to be going the evil sasuke route.
Hope you can include shion and princess gale though.

interesting, but I would change the fullbring ability significantly from what it is in bleach, just because I tend to think a lot of the story line and animations in bleach are tacky.

I like Sakura and Hinata in the harem, it makes sense, and it gives a way to connect to both the shinobi side and the civilian side, Sakura was also pretty torn up with Naruto's "death", actually the only ones I don't like the idea of in the harem are the ones already "taken" by this timeframe in the canon, (ex. Temari, Kurenei), other then those, heck there is even Yakkumo (her genjutsu abilities, make for a great addition since Naruto sucks at those).

Poor Hinata, LOL, she's gonna be REALLY happy once she figures out this ISN'T a dream. ROFL, the reactions should be rather comical.

so she the first one

cool this sounds great

-_- hinata, the story is already sinking into the sea of crap

i have a ?, please answer in next update. can we vote for fillers? if yes, Sara, queen of rouran, is main choice, lol have fun making that happen. If no, then one of the female jinchurriki? sry, bad spelling, so Fu(Nanabi) or Yugito(Nibi) or since harem, both?! :)
Next, constructive criticism cough flaming cough.
1st, hinata hugged naruto, while he was injured tightly -_- i can totally imagine any medic or kakashi let her murder him with a hug.

very good story keep it up :) ut please no hinata, gods no. i actually have nothing agaist hinata, but authors tend to just screw everything over when they had a hinata, like goin from A to maybe a C if you a really good author, please try to make pairing not the main concern. i have seriously have read only 1 fanfic that did hinata well.
Keep it up:)

That's Hinata, right on the dot.