| Reviews for Crossroad |
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   Teeahni chapter 8 . 9/18/2014 Breathtaking! Idk why you don't like this chapter! |
| Teeahni chapter 5 . 9/17/2014 Awww loved Seth's pov! Thanks for writing! |
| Teeahni chapter 1 . 9/17/2014 Aww, loves seeing the determination in Eirika :) loved stairway to heaven but never finished it haha Look forward to reading the rest of it! Thanks for writing! |
| daianapotter chapter 1 . 9/29/2013 very beutifull sad but with hope in the end ) |
| walonvaus chapter 23 . 4/9/2011 You are making me fall heads over heels in Seth/Erika (doesn't hurt I'm playing FE8 at the moment.). Favorite chapters so far are 10 (the one where she proposes to him - that was so cute, and hilarious at the same time. x3 ), and the ones where she's the stripper. I usually don't like AU's but... it just works... so well that I can't help but like it. (plus I imagine Seth in that lovely suit and.. oh dear.) Will definitely keep reading these. 3 |
| Oceanna chapter 18 . 2/23/2011 That one is especially beautiful. Don't ask me why, I can't say, as I can't say why I was always a little disappointed at the end of others one-shot, as if there was still more to say, more to write... Well, anyway, this one is particularly moving So, congrats ! |
| Maxmagnus20019 chapter 41 . 4/5/2010 A fitting conclusion to a satisfying collection of one-shots, bravo I say! Your writing has improved over time, keep practising and you'll be improve even further, always writing more satisfying material. Keep up the good work, thanks for the read! |
| Maxmagnus20019 chapter 40 . 4/5/2010 Wow, I must say I found this to be quite good, the emphasis on the sense of touch and the way you describe the things she feels both emotionally and physically. Great work, keep it up! |
| Maxmagnus20019 chapter 39 . 4/5/2010 Quite good, the rhythm was good, keep it up! |
| Maxmagnus20019 chapter 38 . 4/5/2010 Short, simple and sweet. Keep it up! |
| Maxmagnus20019 chapter 37 . 4/5/2010 Ha, I make my return! A good chapter, probably very probable between the two of them. :P Keep up the good work! |
| Diedre D'Nai chapter 41 . 2/15/2010 Beautiful. My favorite collection of one shots on FF, and now its over. You ended it well, exemplary. Your writing has grown and it has been an honor to watch it. That said... Scattered Rust and Stardust is still going right? |
| Diedre D'Nai chapter 40 . 2/15/2010 Beautiful and sadly sweet. I loved it as always. |
| kittykatloren chapter 41 . 2/14/2010 The final chapter? Oh, no! But it has been so much fun! Just read this and the others you just posted, and they are all fantastic. Especially the last two - you really get into their heads, very nicely, and convey their thoughts and emotions flawlessly. Especially in "Cold," your descriptions are marvelous. I hope to read more from you soon! - Kitty |
| serene-fire chapter 37 . 9/24/2009 I love you! I love Crossroads and i love this ficlet. Such a strange yet satisfying emotion, that is, it captures the emotion beautifully with few words. Even more satisfying becasue Seth is a person who is stone serious. For the in game Eirika, it's kind of OOC. But I think that she's got a dirty sense of humour- and I can imagine her doing that. Said sense of humour apparent in Eirika/Forde's C support conversation: Forde: You know, too exposed. Especially around the...er...midriff, if you will. Aren't you worried that, in the heat of battle, it might, eh... Eirika: Fly up like this? Forde: Augh! Oh... Uh... You were...just joking. Wow. Don't scare me like that!. 'she loves it when he shatters' I loved that line. It made me think of a glass vessel, when it shatters, and it's fun thinking of someone like Seth as that - because, to me, he looks like he's made of stone. 'something he is renowned for' - talent going to waste. I love this line. Aahh, if only his men could see him like that. May the muse be with you. |
