Yay they got engaged.

Ok I read till this chapter because it was pretty good, merc should have some flaws though cause she's just so perfect and u should try and use more words instead of said

Dude I'm loving your story! :) I've read a lot of JohnnyXOC fics and there are several things I have to say I love about your story:
A. Mercedes isn't ice power
B. She is comfortable with the other characters
C. She is just awesome! :)

So thanks for writing a great fic!

I'm sorry, I read the story up to chapter nine and got whiplash. Everything happened too fast and when Johnny goes to the motorbike expo and then comes back there is soo much stuff that happens before that. I understand that Mercy and Johnny were besties before this, but they wouldn't just fall for each other like that.

It has AMAZING potential, but it was rushed and there really was no Flaws with Mercy, she was kinda Mary Sue-ish. Too perfect...It's kinda sad, because this story has so much potential and a great idea behind it and it was wasted. Maybe one day you'll edit it...

Kid wise: E

Other people: B

Timeline: B

Kid Wise - Reed and Sue
Other People - New Villain (Maybe Namor? I'd love to see the Reed/Sue/Namor love triangle)
Timeline - A year later

AWESOME!

Kid Wise:

E) Make both Johnny and Reed faint when they here the news.

Other People:

B)Bring back the Surfer(As a good guy) it would be ausome

Timeline:

A)A year start when Merc and Johnny are abut to be married

Reed and Sue should have a baby:) A year later ;)

Umm and Merc have a pregnancy scare

Ok listen up, Merc is alright but she's to 'Sueish'. She doesn't have enough complexities as a character as a matter of fact she is a pretty dull character and a little boring to read.

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hi i love the story

kid wise: just B an C

other people: sufer back an new guy

timeline: a year

keep it coming love meggy

Good job, I like it so far.

I loved the story, heres my opinion for a sequel:

Kid Wise:

Either B or D (just Ben and Alicia)

Other people:

A, B, and C!

Timeline:

Either A, B, or C.

Please hurry and write it! I need your stories to destroy my boredom!

LOVED it!

mkaay id like Ben and Alicia, and Merc and Johnny to have kids )i figured that would give Sue something to be jealous about and Ben needs to be happier(

next one should be...A and C

and i think it should only be a year in the future