weird; a mix of different time periods.

And whats with "Brigila of Briar, Niciliara of Niagra, and Kemerly of Kent"?

First off those aren't places from "Alanna"

And secondly the people have similiar names to the place their from which sounds like ur trying to be poetical.

Hm...

And by the way, its "Alanna" not "Aleanna"!

... Does this mean you've abandoned this story? Or are you going to continue? Please continue; it's great!

x Caramel

Hey great story! i just have no idea what story this is from... but i've read Tamora Peirce's books before, so i know it must be good. I like the charecter Jon, he's my WAY favourite...

Update soon!

x Angel

more, MORE, I NEED MORE!

Great story. Again, your charectors have more depth of personality than many stories out there.

Also, Update if you love me...please... ;( on both the Lost Dragon and The Light of the Chosen One

Ruri-Gin Ryu-.:_:.

This is quite...um...confusing? Yeah, confusing's a good word. Do you think this should be in TP or in original fiction?

i really dont get this but is alanna's name supposed to be mispelled and is this after alanna's time?