I just triggered Remus

Your narration was good along with your humor. I'm about to check out some of your other works. )))))

Tragically sweet- I love this!

The ending...I can't stop laughing...so great, and so sweet in the beginning. I also like the idea of Remus being a little jealous of Charlie ;) just a little of course

"'How many times... Honestly, Remus, we were having a moment there...'" Haha! Love it!

Haha. Love, love, love the ending

That was great, well done! The ending sentence was just perfect. I particularly enjoyed the red shoes for Ginny, Tonks owling for a present idea and the overall feel of the writing; this is what I imagine canon writing from Tonk's perspective would be like.

I absolutely adored this. Such a nice sentiment and exactly what Remus needs shoved into any and every orifice.

I do love me a tad of action/adventure in a good old romance story, and this definitely delivered. I can't even begin to imagine how Remus must have felt when he found her lying outside like that, but overall the story was really sweet. And him giving coupons, well, too funny not to be amused by.

Of course, the ending was perfect. A moment ruined by him using her first name!

Love the parting line! I'm still grinning

This was wonderful. Truly wonderful. Given that it's Christmas in 4 days, I whole heartedly enjoyed this. :)

Awesome story! The last line hilarious :P

HAHA! Oh man, that last line was pure brilliance. I loved it.

Oh, that was brilliant. I was giggling like mad, especially there at the end.

“Is it dirty?”

His cheeks flamed and Tonks almost choked.

“It is! What is it?”

Definitely brilliant. :)

Sincerely,

Tzaryana

“How many times… Honestly, Remus, we were having a moment there…”

haha!

oh dear god... that was great.