Wow...*_* that was a great fanfic! I can't wait to read the sequel. I like how you didn't have Peter blow up, but instead have Claire save him. I think that was really smart!

Love how Peter treated the situation between him and Claire.

"Nathan flew and landed a few metres in front of them, ironically carrying Claire's father in his arms." Not sure why you used ironically. At first I thought Nathan's Claire's father too but then I rmb he's not in this fic. then i thought maybe because they were on opposite sides but now Nathan saved him.

Did Sylar really die?

I've been thinking ever since I watched "Homecoming" how did Sylar not even bleed when he fell whereas Peter truly died? What power did Sylar have?

It's not very often that a fic makes me take out the dictionary (well, switch from Chrome to the dictionary app really). 'brooking no disobedience' Thank you for teaching me a new word

They're all saying goodbye without actually saying goodbye. Peter committing their faces to memory :'(

best story i've read on here! D

Aw, this is really good! I enjoyed reading it! I love Paire stories! Great job, I can't wait to read the sequel.

I've spent the last two days reading on this fic, and I have absolutely enjoyed every moment of it. Lovely writing and great characterization! Thanks for a fantastic Paire fic.

"He joked once that I was his cheerleader, on account of having saved me that first time"

ive heard this before, did he really say that?

Wow, wonderful story. Lovely length and integration of canon. Normally I don't read much adventure fanfic, but this was great! I thought you kept to the rating well, and did the Paire nicely. Thanks for a great read, I'll be moving on to the sequel now!

This was an amazing story I can't wait to read the sequel, im sure it will be as great as this one :)

This story was amazing. You kept the action going from beginning to end. I read it all in one sitting. I just couldnt leave. Congratulations for your brilliant work.

This was honestly the best heroes fic I have ever read. It was everything I ever wanted a fic between Perter and Claire to be. It was honest, and real and didn't push the two together despite everything, and it was nice an gradual. Very Very good writing.

This is an absolutely gorgeous Paire fic; it's definitely one of my favourites. I love your characterizations of Peter and Claire, both as separate characters and in their interactions. Though you make it clear that they share an instant connection, you perfectly capture the tenuousness of the initial, getting-to-know-each-other phase. It was great to read about Peter and Claire learning to be roommates and friends in Peter's apartment. And you advanced their relationship at the right pace, neither too quickly nor too slowly. I also really liked the Micah-aborted love scene as well as the epilogue, which both showed how much Peter and Claire love and want each other because they are willing to wait until it is right. Thank you so much for this wonderful story :)

it was beautiful i love it!