This is amazing.. even after 13 years on.. bravo to you my friend.. bravo.

Amazing. Feel like this was actually happening in the world. This is cannon to me.

Great story

One of the best anidala fics out there. The cookies made me crack up rofl. :-)

Beautiful. Thank you!

Famous last words. ‘I’m going to tell’ They are SOOOOO doomed!

Loved

Omgg iT was sooo good i loved iT so much. IT was really romantic and you are a really good writer, you have talent.

Xx

"I wonder what's gotten into her...p

Good story!

Children are so pure and innocent… Love Ryoo and Pooja so much in this fic. They were such sweethearts when they swore to keep their secret. It would be much easier to tell everyone and really who wouldn’t believe them? It’s so clear the two of them are in love.

And their curiosity about his lightsaber is so, so funny. OMFG.

“Yes, love. I have played with his lightsaber. And I quite enjoyed the experience.” Padmé is such a bad auntie. Such a bad auntie HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

And the Naberries are such a family. I can’t stop laughing with their suggestions about Padmé and Anakin together. Really, how can people not notice them?

“I do not ogle, young lady. I appreciate.” Mrs Naberrie is surely the best! Love this woman! But sometimes I hate her motherly tracts. It’s funny to read and watch a parent trying to pair another character up, but it’s so annoying when it happens to you. And all the embarrassment. All the times you want for the whole to swallow you up. Ugh. I hate it with my entire being.

“Do not mistake that for blind allegiance…” Ah, Anakin… Needless to comment this further. But I do like Ruwee and Anakin interaction very much. Time for some bonding between father-in-law and son-in-law. And only god knows how much Anakin needed such encouraging words about himself. It’s easy to think he was a gullible character and that chose the easy way out, but when we think closely about his character he was extremely naïve and believed in people too much. Believed they were all good and really… who can judge him? It’s not like the Jedi Order taught anyone better. It’s not like they understood him or even tried to.

Now… that lemon. It was something else entirely. MY GOODNESS, WHAT A LEMON!

And the ending… Ah the ending…

I gotta go now, when I've some time I'll come back to review chapter 4 and 5

Pooja and Ryoo are possibly the best children ever. So adorable and with the right amount of devilishness in them. Impossible not to love them endlessly (and laugh endlessly as well)

"Does Anakin ever let you play with his lightsaber?" I read that when I was going to work, in the train, you have no idea how hard I laughed. I think everyone thinks now I’m a bit dysfunctional (not that they’re wrong, but…)

And really what is it with parents and their needs to get their children a so called soulmate? When I read this fic I got so mad with Padmé at the end of it all… But I’ll talk about it when I get there. I know Ruwee has only the best interests at heart, but it’s so frustrating.

Anakin and Padmé’s quarrels (at this point) are so funny and cute to read. Impossible not to love them, right? It’s good to see a light side of their relationship, there are some fics that depict only the drama and the bad things (not that I don’t like a good drama and angst, but I think you’re my favorite author when it comes to portraying the light side of their relationship).

Sola is really, really the best sister ever. HAHAHAHAHA I couldn’t stop laughing with her suggestive comments. Really, I don’t know how they managed to get away with this marriage for so long. Probably the biggest inconsistency in the entire SW universe.

Anakin’s uses of the force would be so harshly judged by Obi-Wan. Tsk. Tsk. But the scene with Pooja and Ryoo was so adorable I couldn’t help but smile all the time while reading it. It’s a pity we’ve never got to see him as a father to the twins, I bet he would be adorable with them and spoil them rot.

The line “What if the Sith Lord if from Naboo?” is so funny. Ah the irony.

It was a very precious chapter. Loved every line of it.

Hi xD

It’s been such a long time since you have last posted something for the SW fandom, so I don’t know if you’ll see these reviews, but well… your fics are so amazingly written I can’t help myself. It’s been a few days since I’ve read them, but only now I had the time to leave a proper review.

First of all, your writing is superb, and I love how sweet and mature you can make their relationship in your fics. It’s so refreshing and so adorable all the same! Love it very much.

And your lemons are something to commend for, so well written and passionate and everything a reader can expect of a smut. Just with the right amount of the psychological and emotional side as well. I simply love them.

Needless to mention Sola is the best sister ever!

This fic is a gem. Truly.

Now, let me review the next chapter!

so damn good

LOVED this story! WOW! I had to read it twice... I LOVE Anakin's humor is this story.
Many forget that Anakin was a young man. But very passionate.
Sniff! Sniff!
Great Job Shawn 30 :)

Hah. He was right
the sith Lord is from naboo. Palpatine is so evil.