cute.
the ending was nice, i liked the scene in the church too, and yuffie being described as an electroluted chocobo.

I've read a few of your stories today and I just love the way you write, you really seem to have a great grasp of your characters. This story inparticular stood out for me, everything about it just seems so spot on with the way Yuffie and Reno interact and speak to each other. You've really done an excellent job with this. A favourite for sure!

I have no idea how you managed to get Reno RIGHT and communicate that no, he's really not the type you fall in love with, while still making this so friggin cute. Yuffie's character is a bit more understated here than I usually find it and I absolutely loved that - usually I can't stand her. Really awesome work.

I really, really liked this story.

You portrayed Reno perfectly, excellent characterization.

Very enjoyable to read :)

squee D

I don't know what it was

but this left an awesome fuzzy feeling in my stomach

Very nice. I like how you allow us to know the thoughts and feelings of both Reno and Yuffie. There is no doubt about why they would be attracted to each other. Good job.

mar

i loved it. the way the words were woven were more like poetry than prose, and i believe that is the beauty of it. very well done.

He watches her storm out of the church and wonders if the sick feeling in his stomach means that he’s just done something very stupid, or something very noble...it’s probably just indigestion...

i like this piece! really like this! your candid way of telling the story is really refreshing. after cid, reno is the other guy sensible enough to be paired with yuffie (vince is too stick-in-the mud serious, you know?). and i really admire the way you have written reno. he can look pretty stupid, but then again, you made him into something like this:

“Stunning. Highly attractive. Dangerous. Handsome.”

thanks for sharing :D

Aw this was FANTASTIC. You acheived that nearly superhuman feat of making a relationship between Reno and Yuffie cute without compromising either character.

"gorgeous yellow lilies which had been everywhere around the Imperial pagodas" is the loveliest thought and image ever. Was just a class fic _

Very nice one-shot~ I really do like the way you portray Yuffie and Reno's dynamic _ This one feels almost-nostlagic and it feels...quiet, but still so believable. It was lovely, as seems to be the usual with your work :) Keep writing~ :D

I loved this. The whole read was so entirely witty and fluffy and just so perfect-and let's I just got into YuffixReno because of this.

I feel like squealing because of the cuteness. MOOHAHAHA.

Again, very nice. Go you.

Loved it. Great job.

Beautifully written. Simple, short, and cute without being fluffy. Yay!

Pretty cool - great interaction between Yuffie and Reno, playful and mocking at the same time, and I liked how you worked in the background stuff for both of them. It developed the characters and made their actions more explicable and meaningful. Very good writing as well. Nice job. :)