I like your Aang: simple, diplomatic, matured. I really did enjoy this.

ahhhhhhhhhh i am so excited for this 3

Aww, adorable! My favorite chapter in this story.

Best thoughts of a child: it was everyone else who was strange since they didn't look like Da

Love the different POVs! Thank you for this lovely second part to the series!

Oh no! Azula and Jet are going after them!

I also realized that you wrote the first story before the third season came out, so sorry for dumb questions. Can't wait to read the next sequel!

Very interesting

Yea Zutara!

:'3 DAWWW!

You expressed Zuko's loss of Mai so very eloquently! Makes me wonder if you know or have experiences that type of loss. I've always liked Mai just not with Zuko but you gave her dimentions and showed how well they worked together.

It was a pleasure to read.

Astounding work as always.

Seriously, I am dying of laughter. I'm in an office building and restraining my usually somewhat scandalous laughter is hard since this room echoes and it's not as fun that way.

Dang it, how do you do that? Lu Zuo is just so darn cute! Everything about your portrayal of him warms my heart (something that's hard to do when it comes to kids). You are fantastic at this; brilliant how you given them monosyllabic titles because he's a baby, something that wouldn't be common sense to most people. Urg, you suck in how awesome you are at this...okay, so you don't suck but you're still awesome at this.

Sometimes Sokka's just an idiot. A stupid, lovable idiot, but an idiot nonetheless.

I loved these .. an in-depth look at these amazing characters.