I cried like a baby at this scene... I'm crying all over again!... T-T It was really well written and, once again, kinda helped me understand the game even more... I really could feel what Axel "felt", and I know I would have done the same thing to get my best friend back. Well done!

Oh, this was so beautiful. I love the way you wrote Axel and even Sora, and my heart breaks at the little fragments of Roxas. Thanks for a good read.

Omg I'm tearing up right now! I freaking love Roxas and Axel! Their story is just so sad!

I'll be honest-this made me tear up-/chokes/gosh...and this is exactly why I should avoid stories that included these scenes-they were the saddest for me-/crais/anyways-great story-it's amazing-I love how you came up of possible thoughts and emotion Axel may have had-and wahh-everything just fits so perfectly-Q 7 Q well done as usual ; 7 ; ))/

Now I'm seriously crying TT This was sadder than Hollow Heart...

Brilliant! TT

I love the way you told this.. XD It was just SO in-character.. Heart-breaking! XD Wonderful job! ToT

That was very beautiful. Its was so sad but im glad that in the end Axel confessed and Roxas felt the same very well done id favorite it if it didnt make me cry

I hate reliving through this scene everytime I play the game!

And your writing is so beautiful and perfect that it makes it so much more painful to imagine...

I just want to ball up and cry and vent out the frustration for why Axel and Roxas had to disappear!... Sigh.

Great job with this fanfic though...!

xoxo

Well, that was depressing- but good, as are all the rest of your stories.

...Again, another great one.

Omgoodness, so sad! I loved it! It was sweet, and I especially loved the last sentence:)

Oh my gosh, this story made me cry, and only about two or three stories have done that propaly, like big tears rolling down my face. Not just damp eyes.

The end just got me, it was just so beautiful and moving, your such a amazing writer.

Good luck in your text fics!

Ohotama

I always cry at this scene in the game, but this story made me bawl! This is so beautifully written, there are just no words to describe how perfect you captured this moment and how true Axel's thoughts ring with me. You made them completely believable within the canon story and this would have been a permit compliment to it. Wonderful work, as always.

Very sad. Well done changing POV makes a whole new story. You captured canon right too. Now excuse me while I go cry.

OMG. That was...

OMG! *goes all chokey* That was... really hard to read.

And I thought WATCHING it was killer painful!

Bitter sweet. How horribly bitter sweet. I seriously don't know whether to hate you or love you for writing such a lovely story with extra insights, but writing it a bit too well that it got me overly emotionally involved before hitting that really painful moment I never wanted to be reminded of again.

Seeing as I have only one story left to read of the 49 or so I have been indulging in (a thought that terrifies me, btw... not to have anything left to read to keep my own darkness at bay)I may just have to go back and pick some of the more happy-endings stories to leave off on!