Reviews for The Strongest Ninja in the Universe |
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Otsutsuki no Yami chapter 14 . 4/17/2017 And with this you jus managed to ruin your own story. COngratsulations. Best way, lets nerf the saiyans who had work hard for power to protect their family. THIS IS BULLSHIT! |
Ntraveler chapter 14 . 1/14/2016 Do continue this story please |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2015 This needs to be put in the naruto and dbz crossover |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2015 What the fuck |
SNitU Fan chapter 14 . 5/3/2014 When are you going to update? |
Guest chapter 14 . 12/30/2013 when the fuck r u going to get the next update on this fucking shitty story, bitch... been waiting for 2 yrs now, bitch... |
Son Goku chapter 1 . 4/24/2013 I stopped reading when i found out it is named Naruto who is not the Hokage son. |
FanficFan chapter 14 . 1/10/2013 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I LOVE CROSSOVERS! But till this day I had yet to find a Dragonball crossover I could read halfway through the first chapter and be resolved to keep going reading the fic. But this! This fic had me COMPLETELY HOOKED from start to finish. It’s just... ALL KINDS OF AWESOME! The writing is SUPERB! The characters portray is... ON THE DOT! ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! And then comes the dreaded glance at the last update date... and DESPAIR! NOT ANOTHER ONE! ONE MORE FIC falling through the cracks of the authors neglect! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... *whimpers* UP-DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE! |
Guest chapter 9 . 12/13/2012 what happen to broly |
Uzumaki Kazuma chapter 14 . 8/24/2012 Loved the story so far, just hope you don't put Naruto and Hinata as a pair to overused. Are you ever going to update this story if not then, R.I.P "The Strongest Ninja in the Universe" one of the best Naruto and Dragonball Z crossover of all time! |
ZerotheAntiHero chapter 14 . 7/15/2012 Please continue with the story I love it. |
Calen chapter 13 . 6/29/2012 what the hell! you must really hate gohan for some reason. pan is a right bitch. youre making gohan out to be a retard. also why would he leave his family for so long if not to train? |
Calen chapter 12 . 6/29/2012 In response to your question at the end, liked it up until the Gujarati interference bit. Don't mind her but your setting her and naruto up way too young. Seems forced and lame. Naturist clones do not vanish when he loosed concentration. Also the 4th was a right evil sht, finds baby naruto and abuses him by putting a demon in him? Then how the village treats him, if gohan finds out as good as he is Destroy the village! Could get pan in on it too, father daughter bonding. |
Semi-Professional Scotsman chapter 10 . 5/23/2012 You know how to add the shit I hate in stories, 1. You put in meaniningless shit no one wants to read 2. You put in the normal memory wipes every person seems to want to do 3. Your obvisaly gonna make Naruto weak as shit 4. You took 7 or so chapters to actually have a full chapter about naruto and ot when he's an infant, My advice give someone else your ideas and get them to write the,m and make sure he mentions your name |
Semi-Professional Scotsman chapter 9 . 5/23/2012 Stop fucking portraying Naruto as a fucking baby! |