Oh God...did Luffy...eat Hansel and Gretel?!

"More smart, more safe... Mortein" Lol! Love that part

I really love your story. lol

This is awesome story. You know in one piece theaters have something similar.

Good lord, how many fairy tales have you utterly mauled to death by now? Yikes.

LOL

(clears throat) Eh-eh-ehm...

ROTFLMAO, Dude! I mean it was like "Okay what the heck is this person smoking and where can I find some?" Now... well, it's the same question. XD

BRILLIANT!

LATER!

A very interesting way to tell this story. Well done.

Oh man, you are a genius, a genius I tell you! That was one of the best non-canon One Piece fics I've ever read!

Wow that could be something about Snow White and the Seven Dwarves lol. I guess Kaya's Snow White and she uh...got clonked out by a gravity apple? One word for your fic 'pure humor and insanity' Lol.

Ace allergic to bats lol. I loved the advertisement and the slogan for it. I was like 'WTF?' and just cracked up all the way.

Whoa, Nami ripped up a map? Well it would've been soggy in the end? And what the hell was Sanji talking about colors for and what is Robin talking about and where's Usopp for crying out loud? (no pun intended)

Funny I was reading a parody of the Wizard of Oz on this same site but by a different fanfict writer. If you've read it, you know whom I mean. Btw (so that's what happened to that loud old crone? She got smooshed to death by a flying house? Good riddance, I hate loud old ladies but Robin I can tolerate. Nico Robin, NOT Robin Hood. Wonder if he's been eaten yet?

It would be dynamite and golden if the other Straw Hats were present to see Zoro barking like a doggie O

Equinophobia lol. I know that's a word, Equus is some ancestor of the modern day horse. Anyways, I can't say much but I won't stop reading until I've completely read this entire fic!

So Stumble Across Inn is a huge coffin, WOW~? Amazing.