Aww that was too cute!thank you for this!

This was marvellous. Thank you.

It doesn't need to be said, and it doesn't need to be discussed. Everyone already takes it has a granted truth )

awwwwww that was cute XD

LOVE the end with Nanoha n Fate close to each other while sleeping XD

hope more to come 3

make more pls

Adorable! Your stories are all so cute...but in a subtle, non-cavity sort of way. XD

I think Hayate and Arisa would make a great team, haha. Arisa is so oblivious but Hayate isn't as outspoken...dangerous combination!

I love your Nanofate. They're so sweet and caring...very good keeping them in IC by the way. Love it!

Well, well, soldier...

Goddamn it! I coulda sworn I left a review here a while back...

Ok, no matter.

Helluva job, son! Outstanding.

Funny, cute, naturally romantic and FLUFFY! 'Loved every second of it.

Nice work, soldier.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

After watching Strawberry Panic i found an interest in yuri but i really liked it after Nanoha A's. Since it had a subtle yuri fragrance in the air and in Strikers they almost seem to take a step to more. Alas, it did not happen. But i still hope they will make another series and give us some fluff in it. or maybe they think it'll kill them to satisfy a fans desire?

Not bad at all, fun to read XD!

What I'd like to say is, great job, really. It may get a little hard to read at times because of the long sentences but it's still good. I loved how you portrayed their relationships and the humor thrown in was really good as well. It was really sweet to see them this close together. It had me grinning from ear to ear x

Well all in all, excellently written. )

Until then,

Aki -

Very cute. Saw another one, so I'm going to have a look.

This was a rather interesting story actually. At first I was expecting it to be a little more... how you say "Normal". The author, Estrea, uses a style of writing that I don't see very often. Instead of the standard paragraph, speak, paragraph, speak repetition we are instead treated to a more of a "Free flow of thought". Everything simply mingles onto the line before it as if it wasn't an actual story but rather an understanding. The way the words flow is quite interesting, and I personally will be sure to read another fanfic by Estrea

The coupling in this particular story, being Fate/Nanoha shoujo-ai, was very well done. There was no need for a confession of love, or some sappy over the top moment where they admit their feelings. The two simply share a type of Synergy, and that is enough to convey how they feel. All in all I was quite impressed by this, as it is something that you hardly ever see: A romance that is true to its nature but with no real "romantic" part in it.

Characters are a little un-true to their canon counterparts and instead tend to mingle more to the image that was given to them by the fan-made manga style parody floating around on the web. Hayate being a cosplay fanatic is one of the things I noticed right away, and the other influences are there as well but need not be mentioned. I don't mind really, as this is a FANfic, and most fans from what I have seen like that image, myself included.

The sentence structure can be a little difficult to follow at points for some more inexperienced readers. Some sentences were very long, and were in long paragraphs as well. I see this as more of a talent than a bad thing, and it shows that the author has a good understanding of grammatical rules and how to employ them. For those who lose their focus easily you may find yourself losing your place on the screen but it is definitely worth readying that is for sure.

I rate this story four of five stars based on the style, character development, plot, grammar, and originality. Very well done, worth recommending.

To be honest I am absolutely CONFUSED at which pairing is in canon and which is fandom, for the Sound Stages and StrikerS have served to throw everything out of balance. Whatever the case, you have done well in crafting a scenario that hints at one but at the same time keeps options open in the gray area that hangs over the relationship map of the Nanohaverse. A hilarious yet subtle peek at the private lives of the Asuran crew, and their Neutral friends. I'd certainly want to know what happened in that drunken mess!

PS: I wanna own Fate too, but Nanoha's Starlight Breaker begs to differ.

kool. Your story is so in line with the characters. I smiled at the cosplay part. Just imagine how Vita(pouting) and Signum(blushing) looked wearing all kinds of cute stuff at the promptin' of Hayate :) hahaha

Great story. And of course, Fate and Nanoha are perfect for each other, dont you think?

Your understanding of these characters and your storycraft continue to astonish me. The little things you've brought up, like the small differences in how Hayate would react when paired with either Arisa or Suzuka rings so true! And your ability to get inside Fate's head and illuminate her thoughts in a creative and versatile way makes me green with envy. Well done isn't enough for what you're doing with these stories, Estrea. Thank you so much for sharing your talents in such a pleasurable way.

FatexNanoha FTW! :)

~Mares Guyver