That was good. But it kind of ended abruptly. Naruto is still mortal and Sasuke and his son are immortal. Sad, ne? No sequel! :( T.T

Still, great story idea. I enjoyed it.

aw this story was really kute! _

wow i loved the ending it was really good!

That was good! Luved it! But wait, did sasuke die or not? And that means naruto is gonna die eventually and sasuke will still be alive and then sasuke might comite suicide and then nasori would be depressed and kill himself too...

Aw... is that it? If so cool. If not, also cool.

This story was rather confusing to me o.o,, I read parts and they were good, and others I was banging my head on the desk trying to follow o.o Storyline was a tad chopy but the plot was really good - good job - ...dun take my opinion too serious I am a bit of a critic o.O

Your punctuation is strange I will admit, and the story line seems good o.o;; but The way it went from them showing a sign of hatred to becoming a softie went a bit to quick in my opinion other then that it looks really good I will contiune reading -

wow... i love it... i cried... really i did...TT

AW what a great chapter i so loved it _

wow. this story jumps all over the place. its still good but i am TOTALLY confused. well ja ne. _

eh? how can it be over naruto's gonna grow old and die but there going to live on hows that a good ending?

glad that turned out good for them even get even better! love it!

oh naruto you lost your memories i dont that being part of the deal, and what happened to the missing 8 years i though every thing was going to work out fine, i really do hpe that naruto can get his memories of sasuke back

Homg! Wow, dude I have to say this,

It's like a yaoi, Arch Angel/Fallen Angel, Demon, version of Moulin Rouge! I can't wait to read the rest! . I LOVE IT!

oh what a great chaper i really hope sasuke ok