huh? So...Zuko supposedly dumped Mai for Katara who then dumps him for Aang? And so then he gets back together with Mai? Wtf? Way to misrepresent the characters. He's not the type to cheat; his affection for Mai is constant.

That was awesome.

This is wonderful, it really sums up both their personalitys perfectly.

I love it! Maiko would never really be cute and fluffy so I love how you've portrayed the relationship between them.

How can anyone say this is "immoral"? Immoral is a 16 yr old and a 14yr old! that's sick! the only reason I ship Maikp is because Zuko is 16 and Mai is 15! Plus, Mai loves Zuko, and Zuko needs the lovin' not fight after fight with Katara!

Wonderfully written, by the way...Love the Gluttony! Indreace the squashiness the is fatty! WE!

Yay! These are really amazing! Can't wait till the next four!

Well done you. I especially liked the last one- you wrote Zuko very well. The first one was good, too, though.

Man, the shippers need to get over themselves...