please PLEASE continue the story! I love the way you wrote it so far and *crosses fingers* hope there's more of it in the future. You're a great writer. Hope to see an update soon*suddenly pouts as I look at the last update recorded.* I still have hope though! Keep up the amazing writing!

are naruto and hinata the same age in this? cause the last lines of this chapter has me confused is naruto like some little kid of is he just being a idiot? lolz

anyway looking forward to your next chapter!

Hope the next chappy comes out soon

You should make the chapters longer and try to write more so that people can read for longer...please. Come on, you could write more and be really popular, just write and write and write. Thanks. :)

MAN THIS STORY IS BITCHIN'. I've only read the first chapter cause I have no time to read with all my exams and that but Naruto hasn't even appeared and i can tell this is going to be good.

Hiya! I like the part you wrote abt,Hinata's was so good! I'm interested to know what happens next, so... write more! I'm waiting...

Great job! :)

hello! (: um... you made Hinata super cute. I like her as a character, but NOT if she's with Naruto cos we all know Naru-chan is meant to be with Sasuke-kun. XD

err...i like your fic. (( though SasuNaru still rocks more more more))

haha. good job; post chappie 4 up soon, k?

-pearl

interesting. I hope you write some more. This story has potential. Be carful, but creative.

Update as soon as you can.

First part, sad and horrible. Not horrible as in bad on your writing, I mean horrible as in how could they do that to poor Naru-kun! He needs a hug but the second half was so adorable. They are just so cute. Update soon. Ja ne.

Nice descriptions, better than some books I've read! D

Anyway, plz write more.

Ty!

This is sounding cute. I can't wait for the next chapter. update soon. Ja ne.

good good good. keep writing. Naruto and Hinata great story. um... plz whatever you do don't screw this up by turning naruto into some kind of super ninja. i've seen it before and it get old fast. good luck!

sharon, you DO know that I'm a SASUNARU freak, right? but yeah, anyway...it's really good, but kinda angsty... not that I don't like angst. oh, and guess what? I'VE BEEN CONVERTED TO A KIKYO SUPPORTER! I ACTUALLY CRIED WHEN SHE DIED & NOT WHEN BAN-CHAN OR JAKO-SAMA DIED! I hope you get more reviews, cos seriously, you write well.

Ever considered shipping SasuNaru instead and writing a nice fluffy fic so that I'll idolise you forever & ever? :))

AND abt Hinata not rejecting him like all the others...

DON'T WORRY, NARUTO! SASUKE-KUN WILL ACCEPT YOU! * whoo hoo*

ehh, sorry for the long review. I'm thinking of shipping Koga xInu now. And so what if I don't like InuKags? *glares at you*

Gd luck for your tests. See ya... XD add in some fluff. I love fluff.

Hey good story so far. The only thing is I dont know how old they are.

WOW! First and only. What an honor.

Keep it up. I am going to start writing soon so keep an eye out for my name._