Hi Hel-sama

I know I have reviewed this story already but I just have to do so again

THIS FIC IS AMAZING!

IT IS NOW CONFIRMED THAT THIS IS MY MOST FAVORITE OF ALL THINGS I HAVE READ AND WATCHED (even better than the anime)

I HAVE READ IT AROUND 4 TIMES ALREADY, BUT EVEN SO, ITS TAKING ALL OF MY SELF CONTROLL TO KEEP AWAY FROM READING IT ALL OVER AGAIN!

YOU SHOULD REALLY WRITE MORE FICS HEL-SAMA!

ESPECIALLY ONE'S LIKE THIS ONE!

THIS STORY IS AWESOME!

THATS PLAIN IT

YOU ARE MY FAVORITE AUTHOR (OF ALL)

HEIMDALL AND LOKI ARE SO CUTE TOGETHER

I LOVE THEM

AND (is Miya, Janet and Kara you OC's? I like them a lot too, ESPECIALLY JANET WITH HER YOYO AND MALET! AND KARA BEING A SIREN IS COOL)

FAVORITE AUTHORS LIST NOW

XD

Amazing as always Hel-chan! It was hilarious...keep it up!

What doesn't drive you crazy? Honestly? Well, ya do what ya want. And I'm still a big pain in the rear. Still doin' good.

I love your stories! I was looking around fan fiction and happened to come accost this story and had to read it again! Keep up the excellent work :)!

OMG!

It took me a long time.. to finish reading this XD

err..I didn't know.. thata was finished already..XD

my..my... good job! plz write more fics like this n-n

ja ne! 0

LOL ROFL FOOMCL! (Foomcl's something I made up during a particularly clumsy stage of my life... with one of those chairs that tilts every which way. Falling Out Of My Chair Laughing. I do that alot.) I could NOT stop laughing! It was cute and sweet and kind of angstish and my printer is yelling at me to print it out and hide it in my binder so I can read it during class. :] I'm ever so innocent. I really loved it! Well written, I only caught a couple of grammatical errors (mostly things like capitalization) which earns you MAJOR points in my favor! Very imagable, and a lot of fun to call out the lines from. (as a random point, another funny line is "I just drugged you for this yaoi picture!" "..Wait. What ELSE happened? WHYAMINAKED?") This is long and rambly, isn't it? I'm tired and staying awake... using... five cans of coke. WORLD BEWARE. :] ANYWAYS, I do love the story and your writing style!

-Wd

(For who can separate the truth from lies and delusion?)

Hey! Awesome story. I loved it. There aren't many Loki/Heimu stries and I'm glad that someone has written one that is so good

~Shana

This story is hilarious. By the third chapter I was already laughing like hell. Well... I have a request... What about a narugami loki fanfic? I really want this pairing but unfortunately there are so scarce fics like that...

Odin IS an idiot! I loved this! There, happy? I finally finished it! I love your fics and you as my best friend.

Awesome! I loved this story so much!

This one was one of my favorite chapters and I think you know why!

Another fav chapter. Keiko scares me a bit. Heimdall and Loki are goofy. Especially Loki after he has ice cream! *missing part from other review for this story*

I am laughing too hard with this one chapter. Nice, especially Freyr's dinosaur thing. That was the best! I'll review on all of my favorite chapters Kitty Hel-san! Poor Ayame though, she's still sick. -.- That's what Ayame gets for playing with my damn hose! Muahahahaha! Sorry, that was random.

I luff this pairing to pieces, and this chappie was cute!

LokiHeimdall 4-ever!