Reviews for Whenever You Want to Hear My Voice |
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Fanfiction lover chapter 1 . 5/3/2013 I admit I love fanfiction, but you write bullshit. |
The Nature Of Randomness chapter 1 . 10/13/2010 Very well done! So sad though... I'm adding it to my favorites! :-) |
Ninja of Dreams chapter 1 . 6/30/2007 Aw, this is short, but I'm getting teary-eyed from it...! Very touching, and emotions are conveyed without being too wordy. It also keeps the reader thinking about the story after they're finished reading it... Oh! And the pair is a definate plus, as well! TTv -Ninja of Dreams |
Mog Anarchy chapter 1 . 1/31/2007 Ahw, sweet. I'm not fussy when it comes to Zelda pairings - if they must be a necessity, but I've always been a big Saria fan - so I greatly enjoyed this. Pretty cool use of description, and there's some strong emotion portrayed here too. :) Great work. :D - Dixie A. Stonehall. x x x |
Lefty the Right-Handed Shark chapter 1 . 1/28/2007 This is quite brilliant. Very poignant, sweet. Couple of things, though: "She smelled like dry cinnamon and wet earth. Autumny." I can't imagine Saria being autumny with all that green over her - and since the next couple of lines of description remind me so much of spring ("like the new growth" "they were obviously seeds") - it seems a little out of place. "And that was… Saria." By this point (from the first mention of Saria's Song, even), I think it's obvious it's Saria. Actually, I just don't like the use of "And that was…" It seems disjointed and unnecessary. But everything else just seems so real. I can feel Link's pain bursting through the screen pf my computer. I like the way the only time anybody speach is from Saria - at the beginning in memory and at the end, giving new hope. At any rate, this is going on my favourites. |
Inflamore chapter 1 . 1/27/2007 I was never really into the LinkxSaria pairing, but this was surprisingly well done. This makes me wonder on the pairing a little. It's very well written. Good job. SoT |
Nitrogen chapter 1 . 1/27/2007 Short, but sweet. I like it. |