well, that didn't totally suck

in fact, it was quite brilliant. i really loved it, and everything made sense at the end. thanks too, for reminding us all about six days, i read that story, but couldn't really remember it just from the title.

anyways, nice story.

casus

loved it!

Great story! I loved how their Dad helped them out! Great ending!

Ohh! Looks really good! Can't wait to read the rest!

I was reading your lastest one shot and figured from your comments I should go back and try this story again. I didn't say anything the first time and yet I do want to thank you for your work.

A nice twist in your story with Sam going between two realities and in the end the one had their dad in it. Yet I'll admit and don't take this wrong, it was a little confusing.

I remember the story 'Six Days' you highlighted in chapter 3 and I'm sorry, I don't believe I ever reviewed on it. I do remember feeling that I was frustrated that Sam left Dean, hiding from him, worrying Dean and refusing his brothers help.

The last chapter of this story was enjoyable as the brothers talked about their Dad and how "He said that everything will be OK." You did a good job writing Dean and Sam and capturing a brother moment.

Thanks for sharing your stories with us again.

i really liked your last chapter...i kinda had an idea that dean from the vision was really john. thanks for the translation at the end...i always wonder what people really put in their stories when they write latin. great job!

Aww! I loved it! Great idea making it their Dad helping them!

I loved the ending! Great job! ; )

Congrat's on finishing your story :-) It was an enjoyable ride. I'm glad everything turned out okay with Sam and Dean.

Thanks!

Oh thank you! That made my morning! And yeah, the dramatic end works. Loved the last line as well, and I still think you should post "Six Days". This was great, but sadly short, but yay for you posting the one shots! :D

And cool, that was John! I didn't guess that. And the whole chapter just flowed, didn't seem long at all. And sure, you can think about a sequel, but you know I'd say that :) And thanks for the Sammy angst in the story, and him ending up hurt even though the demon was after Dean. And um, the shirtless scene didn't hurt either _

All in all, this was a really good story for your return to chapter fics, and please do keep writing some more! Hope you have a really good day. Cya :)

My kingdom to hear those last words on the show!

I was a little confused at first but everything was cleared up at the end. Wish it was longer, I really enjoyed the story!

ok, so it was only a bit confusing, but i still got the jist of it and i really liked the chapter. i can't wait to find out who alternate-reality dean is...please update asap!

Only one more chapter, NO! Hmm, it was alittle confusing, but I think I actually get it... alittle. Im sure next chapter will make it all makes sense!

oH wow! I just found this fic and let me tell you I found it very at-the-edge-of-your-seat exciting! I liked it soo please update soons!