“Three piles of hair”

This chapter is really good

Wouldn’t hurt to leave Eustace behind

Hush Lucy lol

“A coward in the best of times”

This is exceptionally written

One of the best stories I've ever read. Beautifully written.

That was a great story.

Thank you for this Lucian fic!

So beautiful...a perfect story. Happy Writing:)

What a wonderful story! ;D

Some of my favorite lines, particularly due to how perfectly you would phrase things:

"Lucy had developed an extremely bad tendency to tell half truths to cover up her true feelings as she fell harder for not only Caspian but Narnia as well."

"Oh Aslan, please don't separate us. I feel as if I would wither up and die on Earth without the magic of this man and this world."

"The world around them, except for family and crew, was silent, awed by the display of passion between the present king and the queen of legend."

"The love that she and Caspian were making was so powerful and so right that it brought tears to Lucy's eyes, a sense of wholeness and peace filling her."

"Drinian looked like a proud papa who had been pleasantly surprised be their offspring." (this one because I personally love Drinian and thought this was precious!)

wonderful work & this went straight into my "favorites"! :)

this was really a great story.

just in the first paragraph and i love your story so far, i am looking forward to read more of it!

It was sweet and passionate and wonderful, and I just loved it! Raxie immediately became an amazing character, and I laughed so hard when she shooed Caspian away, literally! Not to mention I was laughing hysterically at the end when Lucy is all embarrassed! But in all seriousness, it was completely wonderful and I was totally hooked. Great job!