Daww! I'm usually not a fan of these sorts of things, but this is just too cute!

amazing!you write beautifully!and the pairing is awesome!

(Can't believe I didn't review this already)

I just read a well-written and in-character Adriane/Emily/Kara fic. Wow, you rock! Whenever anyone says something like "you can't ship that because those characters being together in the first place is OOC," I'll show them this. Any ship can work if you do it right :D

I really like the writing. It's kind of eerie, surreal, and disorienting. Post-Ghost Wolf, I don't notice any canon errors. I hope you write more Avalon fic!

You make them sound like little kids. It's kind of random too.

Not bad... a little confusing though. Update soon.

Ok, lightly disturbing... Well written though