Well, originally I was pleased with your chosen pairing, however I'm a bit disappointed in Franz' characterization. I understand you were trying to depict him at his breaking point, but he wasn't really the tender guardian type lover I expected him to be, and the scene came off as a lustful drunken rape...even though you resolved it in the end, it doesn't seem "Franz-like" to force himself suddenly on Albert without him being perfectly fine with it. Even if he was drunk, I feel like he came on too strongly, and that his guard might be much higher given the circumstance. However, this is one person's view, so please don't take it too harshly.

Aww! This was soo cute! I love this anime series alot! And GOD! I cried like Hell when Franz died!

This was really adorable!

Woot! I love the franz and albert pairing. good story too! very emotional

Aw :) Very sweet. I liked the ending a lot!

I love it! You should keep going with this.

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It was good! "

I liked the start more than the end though, it was alittle confusing Don't worry about it though, it was probably just me!

Good 'fic once again! (can you do a bad one? )