Reviews for Love Burgers
banana-archive2018 chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
I'll start by saying that this fanfiction has been in my favourites for years now, since 2008 when I first opened my account on this website. I've always loved Prince of Tennis, and especially momoryo. Of course, it's been so much time since then and I'm much older now. Looking through my profile, I decided to re-read the first thing I'd ever liked enough to favourite, which happens to be this story.

Even after all this time, I really do like this story. I feel like the characters were extremely accurate to their canon selves. The dialogue was very natural, and flowed nicely, in a way that it felt like a real conversation, you know? I felt like this oneshot could have actually been a scene from Prince of Tennis. I truly wish it could have been!

I'm sorry for babbling on, but I wanted to share these thoughts. Though this story is so old now, I still enjoy coming back to it and giving it a read every few years, and only a well-written story can make me feel that way. Well done, and thank you!
another chapter chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
awww... can you make a chapter 2 or even a chapter 3. i want to hear momo say "I love you" to ryoma-kun.
Kaze.Furin chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Thanks for writing "Love Burgers". Momo and Ryoma are cute, simple but so sweet, just like manga. I like this fiction :" It makes my heart feel warm :" I'm so lazy and not good at English (T.T) ! But I love your fiction very much and really really want to translate your fiction someday. Um... Can I translate your fiction into Vietnamese, please!? Love you 3
aoiyumekou48 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Aww, I want to see (if ever) Ryoma's expression when Momo says I love you to him. That would be cute, ne?
Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Hahahahaha, oh, that was so... Momo. xD Gah, I love him. Really. He IS meant for Ryoma though. They're too cute together NOT to be made for each other. Just so cute~! Ahh, I like the burger theme though. I love it when canon ideas are used so much in fanfics. I'm not entirely sure why. I think just because it gives me another connection to things I know about. Not that AU fics are bad or anything, because of course they're not. It just gave me a happy little bubble to read this fic. Thanks for sharing!
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
They forgot Valentine's day and just walked in on all the couples and everything? Priceless!

Well written and fun read!
Lovely Spell chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
Wah T.T that was so good! . I wish it hadn't ended, but it was so perfect.

thanks for sharing!

ja

LS
Speadee chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
Good story! That sounds like them. The Valentine's theme was a good idea, especially the heart-shpaed burgers. Good idea on why they like burgers, too!

Wouldn't Momoshiro already be the captain in the last part? They were at the burger place during Valentine's Day, so wouldn't the following Valentine's Day (in last part) take place when they are in 8th and 9th grade, with Captain Tezuka already graduated?
samayooo chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
Yes, yes! I love you and this fic and the MomoRyo pairing. They ARE meant for each other. -giggles insanely-
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Nice!
KagomeGirl021 chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
kawaii! momoryo is my fav and i love the way you portrayed them _ awsome job!
Renn chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
I was grinning all along as I read this. This is the best MomoRyo I've read in a LONG time (and I just read half-a-dozen, so that's not implying I haven't READ one in a long time ), and I was glad to find it!
skyblue147 chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
XD That's so like them! X3 Burgers and Ryoma blushing under his cap! Swet!
tezuka eiri chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
LOL

It's such a sweet fic.

I think it's so appropriate for the two boys using hamburgers to confess and tell each other how they feel.