I started this story knowing it was unfinished and that the updates stopped in 2010. I still enjoyed it very much.

Even if your story is almost ten years without update, i need to tell you how much i enjoyed It. It Is a great, funny and well written story. Thank you for both stories.

Any plans on finishing this story sometime? Are there any chance it will be updated soon? Only 10 years since the last update. ;)

This is a really good story. I want to know how it ends.

Oohhh! I love everything is seems right!

I like so much, but feel bad for him!

Will is so cute, so I can't stop felling bad for him!

Oh! Ella debería decírselo.

Me siento mal por Darcy...

All is so good!

Elizabeth definitivamente tiene que decírselo a Darcy. Eso es cruel.

Thank you so much for the story so far. Loved it. Looking forward to an update one day

This story is great and I would recommend it to everyone enjoying modern P&P FF not wanting too much angst. It is well written, the set-up is original and I love how you started the story! Even though the story is not complete, you still have a lot to read and it is definitely worth it.
I particularly enjoyed how Elisabeth is actively thinking of what she wants, how best to deal with the different situations she is in and not simply taking the high-road.
I am not sure yet how much Darcy has learnt yet. He hasn’t really had a set-down yet from Elisabeth but you don’t like angst so maybe you were not planning to make it too difficult for him!
On a more personal level, I hope that almost 10 years on, you and your family have been able to move forward, create more memories together and share more love. I will follow in the hope that one day you have the energy and time to complete this fantastic story.
Thank you so very much.

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I realise it’s been years, but hopefully you’re still getting reviews! And I hope your family health issues are better and you’re feeling happier.

This is a really clever idea, I’ve read so many P&P FF and this is the only one I’ve seen with a Vegas storyline. I really like how you’ve kept so much of the original story in, but made it realistically modern. How they are growing together is lovely. I like that Lizzy still questions things and doesn’t just change her mind really easily. And how Darcy is still a bit overbearing and needs to learn lessons, obviously a bit slower than the original due to not having a confrontation. If you ever considered finishing it that would be awesome. I feel like it might be going to get pretty bad though, with Wickhammaybe the tabloids finding out about her previous opinions... eek! I love the way you’ve written Darcy, because he’s so loveable and happy despite the control issues, so it’s totally believable that Lizzy wouldn’t have told him her thoughts at the startbut it really makes me fear for when it does come out, he’s going to be so hurt! Maybe this isn’t such a bad place to end it... when they’re happy! Thanks for sharing.

I remember er reading this 8 years ago with such delight, and I still think about this story from time to time. Would absolutely love to see more of it, if you're still around. It would absolutely make my year :) Much love, Adora.