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Hey Quillslinger,
Thanks for sharing this! The relationship between Shikamaru and Temari is nicely illustrated through their level of comfort and familiarity with each other, and the extent to which they're concerned for each other. I can imagine Temari's reaction when she finds out...

I'd love to read more ShikaTema fics from you if you'd ever be inclined to write more!

~Shadow

This is very well-written and touching.

This is so sweet, and so much in character! I love how you captured the subtle sweetness that I personally believe is ShikaTema, and how you made a wonderful in-canon story from it besides. Great job on this! :)

Please make some more. This is genius. Much love from Las Vegas

i was a little confused and wondered if his little revenge mission split off into au because he obviously went with his team and kakashi. but now, wow. hilarious ending for such a serious fic. thanks for sharing!

Yeah, well, Shikamaru would get away with that. As long as Temari never EVER finds out. In that case, I pity his poor soul. I really liked this story.

This was a great read, with some really lovely moments and good characterizations. Thanks for sharing!

Good god, this is absolutely gorgeous. I love your Temari. Not overly bitchy or flirty. And I loved Shikamaru's contemplation over the meaning of distance. Absolutely perfect.

I do wiah you turned your one-shots into novels :'( they're just too damn good! I want more :P

Hehe

For a moment there I thought this would be an alternate end to Kakuzu. How hilarious to discover I was wrong!

Really great work!

That was a wonderful Shikamaru and Termari oneshot. I especially like how it was not at all fluffy. It was a very good storyline and idea to go off of...although I guess it was pretty cute - the idea that there is no distance at all. Aw...

Anyways, I like how you write. I've been reading some of your oneshots, and they're all very good. YOur plts are pretty good and your writing style is awesome. This is oneshot was very enjoyable to read.

So far, I've had no complaints and critques about anything you write.

Keep on writing and I'll keep on reviewing!

Yes, but I must tell you it mostly involves knocking you unconscious and dragging you back in a tied-up sack when you’re not looking.

Great line.

ADORABLE. Heart-breaking, too, especially the bit with the letters, but mostly just damn adorable.