Cute...! *sniffle*

That was a cute fic.

Fai and Kurogane are so cool!

Have a good day!

nice one

so cute

you're posting things without sending them to your beta again.

i feel neglected.

cute fic, though i found that there were places that you wrote out Kurogane and other places you call him Kuro. i don't mind it when Fai's making up nicknames but not in the story. you're a much better writer then that.

... and you misspelled Mokona. first paragraph, second to last sentence. only one 'n' in Mokona.

That is all. Great fic!

-Vera-chan