very good

Sucks to be you Shinji. Or rocks. I can see this really happening.

LOL! Poor Shinji. There's nothing he can do to stop this either XD

It's nice, and very Asuka like. It's the way I think Asuka really is.

Noticed a single spelling error, in the beginning it says 'holly' it supposed to be 'holy'.

::chuckles:: Cute one. Poor Shinji. Having to deal with Asuka when IT'S ALL HER FAULT is a triple bummer.

Thanks for sharing.

this is good :)

Yup, definitely could see this happening, and more than once to boot!

awesome. though if i was gonna die, id cop a feel. from shinji or asuka.

Insights in Asuka's mind towards the end, very nice finish I must say. Besides some minor grammer mistakes, this was an excellent one shot. Thank you for the great work.

Ruto Kuntai

Ahaha, good job Shinji! That "aw screw it I'm going back to sleep" attitude is the same way I would've felt! I'm so proud. As for Asuka, hehehe, you sly little... You gotta let him slide on this one.

Anywayz, awesome job! I loved how Shinji just accepted the inevitable cuz ya know, there are just sometimes when you can't do jack.

I agree, it's been a while since I read a FanFic. So like Shoujo's Revenge said, it's a nice welcome back. Keep up the good work.

cute story

‘Please let be Pen-pen.’ LOL!

Ya know in this case, Asuka could just threaten Shinji with death if he ever opens his mouth about what happened and let him off the hook. Even Asuka has a sense of fairness after all.

Well done.

Dale (AKA 94saturn)

i have to say this would make a great start to an on going fic

keep up the good work

Excellent chapter.

I have to agree with the others, it's a solid beginning and one I hope you continue on from.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza