Great story! The only change I would have made is have Midna mention her younger brother sooner so that it doesn't seem like you're pulling excuses from nowhere, but other than that, brilliant!

Literally dump your boyfriend. Walkthroughs are for babies.

The ONLY thing that I wish that this story had, is more "physical" proof of Link and Midna's love
Anyway, great, GREAT love story. I know this because I cried by the end of it, which I always do when I read an awesome love story. Thank you so much for this, and I can't wait to see what new, amazing stories you're goin to write in the future!

I belive that this going to be a good story don't stop making Zelda story's and also midna never killed a sage ganondorf (the basted) killed one of them

Your are awesome I love the book so far

Wow that was unbelievably corny but amazingly beautify at the same time. Nice job it was funny as it was romantic thanks for the awesome read.

Now Zeldas working at e-harmony.

THIS should be CANON! Magnificent story!

Beautiful ending to a heartwarming fic, I really enjoyed this! Thank you!

Loved your writing style, and the spunk you put into the characters throughout. Especially love the final sentence, wraps it up really nice!

Nice story... quite fun to read... I would like to ask if I could do a sequel to it considering that your other Zelda stories are not sequels to this...

I can think of a few things to do... and for one the way you ended it... "No. She might look for us in a few years..."

that alone sets the stage for a sequel to this... and one that could potentially be even greater...

so would you mind if I did write a sequel?

Awww. It's about time though. The blockheads.

Love this story. I especially like the ending because it leaves you open for a sequel and spin-offs for Zelda.

awesome... great fic... however my take on midna's character would've had her being more forceful about a relationship with link.

Good imagery... I can fap to dat grammar!

Every word, feeling and event in this story couldn't do Twilight Princess any more justice if it tried.
Than you good sir/madam for closing this story in the way it needed to be.