Loved It!
In some chapters it ACTUALLY made me cry some tears!

It is okay to shift or change the character of the casts a bit to fit the story but in this one, they are SOOOOO OOC that reading it makes you irritated and annoyed. I've also noticed that you put OMGs in their speech, that is a minus. It is better if you just put 'Oh my God.' This would have been a great story if you just polished your writing skills.
It would also have been great to read this if not for the reason that this story is very lacking. I'm just choosy so don't mind me

kkyyaa itachi is so cute such a good man he really loves naru I hope he can be happy

Your grammar still needs to be polished. As for the story, I've noticed the prologue was very much like the one that really happened in the manga, except for that little kiss of course. Besides that, I really can't say much right now because the story hasn't really started yet, has it? So yeah, proofread.

thank you for your fanfict it realllllllllllllllllllllllllllly awsome!

I really liked the concept of this story and I liked the length of each chapter. But my problem is that it lacked a lot. Your characters were SOO OOC that it was annoying, and you used too many abbreviations, like Gaara would not ever say 'OMG'
Also you randomly put Japanese in there, but your still speaking English. Why not just keep it English. No need to tell us what they mean, everyone who watches the show knows what those words mean... Unless you watch it in English. But I came to the conclusion to not be so mean, because I figure you are probably very young, OR you were very young when you wrote this. This is the last chapter I can read, I have to stop here because this Fic is angering me.
It isn't you, it's just I am picky.

OMG! So cute and happy ending w. I was scared in that part when Naruto was dying TT. But... yay! Everything was fine. I'll go to read the sequel. Bye

almost every chapter hit right in the feels. its an amazing story! please keep writing, you're great.

I think you did a good job portraying the way that Sasuke shattered. Naruto was a sort of constant, a huge one, and when a constant isn't constant anymore a person's whole world shifts. Nice work.

Wonderful! Sometimes I got the impression you dont chose very well the right timing of the scenes, but the history is very good! Congrats!

Some grammar mistakes but I luv it

i love this story. it is really good and very funny.

Please don't take this as a flame, because it's not, just some constructive critisim. The plot itself is very good, I like how you did the characters, and your fight scenes and twists are interesting to read without boring the readers. The only issues I have are the several spelling and grammar errors scattered throughout the story, along with talking in the third person at some points.

I really do like the story, just thought I should point this out. Feel free to yell at me for it. I hate flames as much as the next author, but I do appreciate when someone tells me I did something that could be fixed.

Lovely story!

Wah so hapy