I have found you once more! .

I love it! 3 keep writing!

Hey! First off, i think this was a great story (I've read it twice and am planning to do so a third time).

I especially like Ch. 16 (more romance suits me XD. i do like the totally angsty parts too, there really isn't enough YukiSasu to go around here. It was also a good ending, kept me satisfied (although the raving yaoi shota fangirl in me was also hoping to look for more- never mind).

Um, let me conclude my approval with this- EIT'!

With more...scenes of whatnot.

Love angsty Sasuke and Yukimura trying to understand him and comforting him with his drunk/forcefully loving way at the end, too.

I kinda agree with recless-rage (the whole thing with the flame and the gritty lamp) but I can bypass that anyday. Keep it up! And good work again, I would really love to read more of this kind of stuff...

...You hear me, people? YOU CAN LEARN FROM THIS WRITER!

Oh! It was a great story, read it all in one day (... I might have too much sparetime, but who cares?) It's just amazing!

Okay...

First off, I know every author wants to hear (or read) this: I absolutely love this story, full of angst (my genre *shot*) and torture and, well, the things I like. *shifty eyes*

But...(here comes some (constructive) criticism):

Like I'd stated earlier, although the plot is basically solid and quite good, it was terribly flawed by the English, I think. With some major editing of the language and maybe the help of a dedicated beta, this story could be cleaned up a lot and made more enjoyable. Your ideas and imagination comes through very strongly, but it was hampered by the language. Think of it this way: you can't really see the lovely flame inside a dirty lamp, can you?

But overall, I think this story if worth reading, of course, although I was annoyed at the typos and stuff. *shot* Good job on writing this, and I hope you continue to write more SasukexYukimura!

I also found the use of present tense interesting, by the way. The majority of people tend to gravitate towards using past tense.

I'm not done reading this yet, and I'm reading it while I'm still in college, and it's effing AWESOME.

I lick angst in huge amounts. *shot* I shall continue reading this ASAP~! So far, although I can't say your English is perfect or excellent, the plot makes me want more and more.

Can't wait XD

Sasuke in pain ... the poor dear. GIMME MORE *evil grin*

coolies i'll be on the lookout

woot! i'm excited!

*LEki and Dane go and tackle you.*

They are happy. Hey if you need some help I know a little about the real Yukimura fromthe samurai times. Oh and gues what? On my story Beyond Innocence I am two reviews away from having 100 reviews. Yayness.

Wah, it's the end *bawls*

I actually quite like it, despite the fact that it's THE END *emos in corner* Throwing in Akira and Hotaru at the end there was a good touch _ and it's cool that Sasuke decides to keep his eyes closed most of the time.

chibi: No it's not! His eyes're HOT!

... they are, aren't they *sighs dreamily*

yukimura: and all for MY enjoy~ment!

WAAH! Yuki-chan! What're you doing here? ... OH GODS IT'S YUKIMURA CAN I HAVE A PLUSHIE?

*phone rings* angel-chibi: *picks up* it's your sanity

me: aHH! get it away from me!

devil-chibi: now that's what i'm talkin about!

... i really do have no excuse. XD

What a beautifull end.

Its also kind of sad because it will end here already but maybe...maybe there will be another chapter in future.

If you continue this FF sometime please let me know.

I think you should adding the chapters on this sequel.

very interesting... sorry that i didn't review for the last few chapters. good luck on your exams and school work. hmm, i think you should make a new sequel. hope to hear from you soon, keep up the good work!

I guess I am to late back at this chapter to say NO DON'T END IT YET! Since you did continue it on for a long time.

Anyways I think we got you to 100 reviews now but you could have added some nudeness. ;-)

I swear I posted a comment here back when you put up this chapter.

Anyways this is a great chapter to in many ways.