amazing chapter, for the 1st time i finally see the truth about the lifestyle and behavior of Bonnie...
well, the only question about what we see in this chapter is:
Ron still have feelings for Kim or for some strange reason he finally found the love in Bonnie?

congratulations, i have to recognize that after reading the best of the best K/R fics i maybe readed one of the best finals i ever seen in a while-

AMAZING!

the question that i have in mind is if Kim is really concerned on what Bonnie have planned to Ron?
well, i'm not a fan of Kimi Räikönnen but he's a good racer...
This is the beginning of something interesting!
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let's see what's gonna happen in the chapter 2!

This story was brilliant. Loved how you added up the suspense these last chapters althrough it made me feel kinda emotional lol, the ending wasn't really what I expected but yet again, neither was the whole story, but in a good way, it rocked :) great job.

i thought kim was walking to a cemetery.

SS,

I am very impressed. You had me the whole story and I couldn't stop reading it or crying to it. I am the mushy kind so I cried. It was a great story begining to end. Thanks for a great read.

Thanks,

Silver

SS,

I really am hanging on every word I read. Wow! You really have me on the edge of my seat. I am enjoying your story.

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Silver

SS,

I really do like your story it's making me cry which is the mark of a good story teller in my book. You have me hanging on every word.

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Silver

SS,

You definatly know how to get into the minds of teenage girls.

That was very good about Bonnie. I got a little sad for her but I do understand.

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Silver

SS,

Iam intrigued and can't wait to keep going.I really do like your stories.

Thanks,

Silver

SS,

Good start to this story,you have me hooked into reading more than one part. I look forward to reading more of your chapters.

Thanks,

Silver

This... was absolutely incredible. It completely turned my day around, my god I needed this. Amazing piece of work you've got here, the only criticism I can possibly give it is that it got a little confusing about Ron being injured. Up until the hospital scene, I had thought it was just Kim having a bad dream. Other than that, perfect.

Fun story, it is amazing how a little Ronshine can change the outlook on a person.

I also loved the touch of the old Bonnie near the end of the chapter.

Thanks

Great Story. Very well written and the quasi-commentary bits were a great touch. You've definitely captured their characteristic dialog. Excellent plot with Kim and Ron being together but Bonnie seeking to put "them back in the places". You portrayed Bonnie very well with all her underhanded scheming and manipulations. Now there's a wedge between them and the plot thickens as Kim has designs on Josh. Ah but the tables turned as Bonnie sees the charming nature of Ron and Ron seems to be enjoying himself. Kim however, sinks into despair finding that Josh is taken and wonders why Ron gave it all up. The scene where Bonnie comes unhinged was very well written. And when Kim what seemingly happened that night - again very well done. Then Tara enters the picture. But then Ron has a talk with Mrs. Dr. P. talk about complicated and finds out Kim still loves him. Talk about complicated! And then Ron sinks in a depression realizing the trouble he's caused. Then there's the mission that ends in a bad accident. The hospital scene and recovery scene was always very well done. Most excellent story.

- Drakonis Aurous

MY GOD! Great story Sir Sebastian :D you rock! perfect finish ) its just so sad when a story ends.. ( anyway.. THANKS FOR A GREAT STORY )