This was really good. I love the way you write. Fantastic job!
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You just made my day. Thank you for this story, I loved it. Not many people can really write GOOD oneshots, but this was great. You really have a great understanding of both of the characters.

The line at the end was perfect. And sad. And just generally awesome. As the rest of the fic was. Write more please!

From the looks of your profile, you haven't been on the site much recently, so this review may go out into the void of space... But it's always worth a shot.

I was totally struck by this story. It was beautiful beyond words. Your bookverse characterizations were perfect, especially Elphaba in all of her frightened detachment. She's so incredibly endearing even in her brokenness.

And you get an A for using sex as a vehicle for character development, rather than sex just for the sake of sex (even though I won't complain much about that, either). Bravo!

I hope that, whatever you're doing these days, you're still writing, even if it's not fanfic. You have a gift.

im sad. crying actually. but it was beautiful.

Wow, I think it's great how this story dealt with both of the character's problems and insecurities... very nice.

Aw. Queen of fluff indeed. Very you, regardless of age or quantity of spelling errors. I liked it. Bravo.

Wow, this was heartbreakingly sad and beautifully written- I loved it.

LOVED IT!

...you know its good.

I would bet hard currency that you say "sweet oz" in real life.

You demand respect, and I give it.

*doffs cap*

Oh. My. God. So good. I found it a little funny how they were just carrying on a conversation as they had sex. I hate tragedies like this, but this is a well written tragedy. I really like the characterization of an Elphaba that has been deprived of human contact.

Wow! I loved this story. Kept personalities for both Elphaba and Galinda so true to canon. Really well written character studies in such a short space.

That has to be the best interpretation of Elphaba's reaction to love that I have ever read. You're right...she couldn't just automatically be alright with it...Amazing fic, by the way. I loved it.

THIS REVIEW CONTAINS SPOILERS TO ANYONE WHO HASN'T READ THE WICKED NOVEL?

OMG GUESS WHAT? Yes, another review. Dammit, I just can't stop! I've read this before too, and I'm not sure if I've already reviewed it or not, I can't remember if I have. BUT I AM NOW.

I... didn't see any musicalverse in there. xD All I saw was bookverse. Because Glinda like. Goes crazy in the book. And Elphie died in the book. And yeah. xD THAT WAS THE SPOILERR?

But yah. SITLL OMG GOOD. And I love that Elphie is like "GODDAMMIT I'M SCARED OF LOVE, LEAVE ME BE!" But I hate it at the same time. Because it's like. Love Glinda, Elphie, love her!

Ha. Hah. I'm done.

*OREOS*

Second story of yours I've read, and it's nice. I like the before-after view, it was a good way to show Glinda and Elphie fall apart.

(heehee... some fun T-rated action at the beginning... :P)

And of course, vain Miss Galinda getting wrinkles.. *sigh*... whose fault is anything? blame it on the DNA.. heehee

Thanks for your review response for Would You Find My Razor... I really appreciate it; I think you were actually the second person to ever reply to a review I've posted.

~JD

*sob* That was so..*sob* so *cry* sad! ;_; That last part broke my heart. I hate that Elphie had to die, damn it. SOMEONE REWRITE WICKED.

Anyway, this fic was full of emotion, full of *reality*..so, thanks for writing it. I loved it.