Awesome story. Always nice to see scenes where the average person can help the hero.

Great story! So much fun. Batman&Superman BFFs for the win! Thanks for posting. Blessings, Sophia the Scribe

I came back to retread this story, and it was just as awesome the second time around.

ha! This is so cool xD

The story is interesting. Since you asked about how Bats is portrayed... Bruce Wayne is in-character, but Batman is out-of-character. he is especially "off" in his scene with Lois, because Batman is being too nice and friendly.

Bats rarely apologize, even when he is wrong, and he is rarely wrong. So generally it is treated as a BIG DEAL if he ever said "sorry" to anyone, doubly so in his more recent portrayals. Also, he talked too much, he shouldn't be so chatty in the Batman persona. finally, he should leave mid-conversation with Lois, that is how he is as Batman. Bruce is considerate and amiable as Bruce Wayne, he is NOT SO as the vigilante. Batman leaves immediately after saying what he comes to say, he almost never stays to listen.

I started reading chapter 1 about 15 minutes ago, and then I can't stop.

I'm still a little bit confused about the ending... But overall, it's a great story.

Great cross-over. I loved the story line, interactions & making Martha such a wise, strong personality. Keep up the good work.

cool

Thank you for writing.

I loved this story and having read all stories availible here will now search out your other stuff.

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ooh any chance for a sequel?

I just read this straight through and thoroughly enjoyed it. I especially liked your Bruce and the relationship you painted between him and Clark. Well done!

Wow. I've avoided that Superman movie like the plague (way too much embarrassment) and you still managed to interest me. I love how I can so easily picture the characters in your writing. Very nice work.

WOW Your story is SUPER 8o) I would like to see what would happened if that scary lady with gurney managed to get Bats into same hospital as Kal. They would made great roommates. Or prisoners if they also got that window bolting nurse to watch them so they would not escape throught window.

8o) poor superboys 8o)

p.s. Sorry for my english 8o)

I just love the ones where Superman and Batman get to work together... *grins* And Bruce has a positively WICKED sense of humor, doesn't he? *snickers*

i really enjoyed ur story!