Reviews for Change of Power |
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gemm1mt chapter 24 . 6/29 Awesome man. Please continue |
Lukkai chapter 15 . 9/24/2019 Some words about the bike: Even with Marvel/Ranma style suspension of disbelief the propulsion system you're proposing still seems very inefficient. If the photovoltaics on that would be powerful enough to do what you want them to do (which they have no chance of being, sorry), it would be way easier, safer and more efficient to just drop the whole hydrogen part and make it a full electric. All modern standard use bikes use keys. And most of them use a start button (those that don't use a kickstarter instead, never is it the key that starts the motor). The second is for convenience, the first for security. Using a fingerprint scanner on the start button to replace that security by key system is just about the worst possible choice for a motorbike, seeing as you will usually wear gloves while using it. And if anywhere or -when not particularily warm, those will not be fingerless gloves. Meaning that everytime you stop the motor (at a red light, railway crossing, whatever), you'll have to take of the glove, start the engine, then put on the glove again before being able to drive away, instead of just quickly pushing the button with your gloves on. Which obviously will make you very popular with anyone waiting behind you. If you really wanted to go with a fingerprint scanner on this, you wouldn't integrate it in the start button. You'd make an extra space for it (for example where the key lock would usually be) and use it to unlock the bike and start up the electrics. Basically using the scanner as a replacement of the key lock. Not as an extra option in the starting button. |
Virosa chapter 24 . 8/12/2019 well its been years but, its still a good read. I hope that some day you will continue sharing your writing here with us. |
Redripper666 chapter 15 . 5/13/2019 your tired way to hard to keep the story the same givein this is both fanfic and a crossover it killed most of what sould have made this fun to read |
Redripper666 chapter 9 . 5/13/2019 hes not really changeing anything |
fafnir1404 chapter 24 . 2/16/2019 The representative, would it be Thor or anyone from Asgard. |
Sonkuragari chapter 24 . 9/18/2018 Please update. I really want to see where this is going to go! |
Akane Mosoa chapter 24 . 9/3/2018 If your still around I hope your muse for this story returns soon, i’m Really enjoying it. |
Caincrux chapter 23 . 8/30/2018 Too late. The interest in the story is dead. You promised he would have awakened his powers chapters ago. |
Caincrux chapter 22 . 8/30/2018 Frankly this story is dead after b2c6. The author just doesn't grasp the concept behind an x-men fiction and tries hard to mitigate that by introducing daily life scenarios to the story. Which made it worse since 80% of the story is Slice of Life and it doesn't fit to both Ranma 1/2 and XME genre. |
Caincrux chapter 17 . 8/30/2018 This story is too plain for a crossover of two action packed series. |
Caincrux chapter 15 . 8/30/2018 You know when I saw the X-men and adventure/humor tag I thought I was going to see an adventure. This fic feels dead. More on to a slice of life and training montage like in xianxia combined. There are no overarching plot felt in the story. It is more like a 'what if Ranma lived without the rest of the Ranma 1/2 cast' scenario. A fix it glorified do-over. |
Caincrux chapter 11 . 8/30/2018 Why the fuck is spyke reciting Shakespeare? |
Caincrux chapter 9 . 8/30/2018 Its chapter nine. Five chapters since the xmen arc and Ranma is still hell bent on ignoring plot driving scenarios. The muse is definitely ragged here |
Caincrux chapter 7 . 8/30/2018 Y'know i just realized how flimsy the excuse 'exchange student' is. First off it is always voluntary. Second he can just change schools or relocate to his mother's. Third, all throughout the series the side characters always follow Ranma, I doubt they would have let him transfer to America for no good reason other than some no name school demanded him for the exchange student course. |