What happened to Denni? Im lost. Is she died? Hopefully yes lol

i feel cheated i wanted a delicious lemon XD

Great story! Absolutely loved it!

Did I miss something? What happened to Denni? Did you forget about her?

omg that was buetiful u should make a sequel for when trunks grows older and his parents grow older

This should be interesting

I loved this story so much! I just wish Bulma had found out more about Denni. Vegeta still seems attached to her and that bothers me. Oh well off to read part two though I guess you haven't updated in years :(

Short chapter, but I really enjoyed it, nonetheless!

Nice chapter! I found it truly hilarious that Vegeta's ticklish xD! That totally made my day! And the B/V moments were great in this chapter too! :D

The ending was kind of anticlimactic. But you say there is a sequel do I 'll check it out. I d like to see Denni come back. Not so much that I like her character. I just feel her arc is not done. It never even got out that She was Vegeta s lover. I feel like that needed to happen.

So this the role Denni is reduced to. I m a little disappointed. While she is perfectly suited to the role, I kind of pictured her playing a more dramatic part. Sleeping with Vegeta and all. Like having an illegitimate son of the Prince or something. Or least trying to seduce him again.

I d have preferred the Queen Mother to live. I guess for story sake she had to die. She kind of Got shafted out of a happy life I guess. Well she did get to watch the king die. That was probably pretty good for her.

I figured something had to happen since there are no super saiyans yet. A pregnant Bulma on Namek. That's a new one. Well at least she 'll give birth relatively safely. Namek has healers.

Not sure if Vegeta would just say I love you so quickly or easily. But I 'll let that slide. I 've enjoyed the story so far. Plus their formal engagement scene was quite funny.

This story is just full of surprises. I wonder how long it will take them to try and break free. It could be years just like it was in the show. If I remember correctly in the show he was 29 when he finally broke free. That seems a number of years from his current age. I do like the direction this headed.