great

I like the beginning but I have figured out the time period

I'm excited to read this!

Just read through this fantastic story for a second time and I still got teary eyed at the very end. Such a warming and beautiful story, despite the blood, death, and destruction.

This is a really lovely story! I enjoyed It so much, your writing style is just what I was looking for when I am relaxing after exams: not too angsty and full of adventure and romance and AXEL! Haha! Thank-you for being awesome!

Woa! This was fantastic! I really liked this akuroku :D great job

I can't believe it's over! I've been reading this religiously for the past few days (Holy awesomeness you write such involved stories!) and can't believe it has ended! Great ending, I think you wrote it perfectly! I loved all the plot twists and how I could never tell what would happen next! I don't know if you still write, or even check these reviews anymore (you did finish the story over four years ago) but if you do, I hope you still have joy of writing! And good luck with your acting and dancing, I really admire you for everything you've managed to do! I hope someday I'll get to read more of your writing :)

So... I'm reading this story and I like it a little. The only thing is, I wish it were more realistic. I don't mind the characters being a OOC. It's an AU story, so that's a given. But this is supposed to be a pirate ship. I mean really, a queen sized bed and a couch in Axel's room? If he's got that, then the captain probably has a full two bedroom apartment as his cabin!

You've also never clearly defined what time period it is. They're still sailing on a ship but Kairi was using a phone. So is the ship the black pearl or a humongous yacht? You're characters aren't unique because this is fanfiction, so you have to work with setting and plot. Plot seems fine, the setting is lacking.

For once, I have nothing to say. I have literally been rendered speechless because it was simply that damned awesome.

This was genious, and i am very happy i read this. Your a good author, and i hope you write others.

Nice Les Mis reference in the last chapter. Made me smile.

Anywho I have spent two whole nights reading this story in its entirety and though I'm very very tired, I just had to stop and review this wonderful fanfiction. Keep it up!

I have to say that I have been reading this story for quite some time, and i have loved every chapter. I was really glad that you decided to stick through it all and continue writing this even though your life was very busy indeed. You are a very talented author and i hope that you continue with your writings. I'm gonna start reading the other four stories that you have out now so i will see you then. lol.

Keep up the great work,

-Mr. Kusanagi

*wipes tear away* Beautiful ending I agree with you it is a nice fit for the end. This story was beyond amazing and extremely captivated my interest! Great job! XD

whoa~ crazy twists! great fun! thanks!

man, i hope zexion winds up with someone.