I have read Playing with toys and God it burns and want to say Thank You! For all the hard work and hours you put into each of your two stores! I think that they are beautiful written and suck you into them to the point you don't want to eat or sleep and reset work when you have to stop reading just to go to work because they are that interesting and fun to read! Hope you are doing well and that your family is doing well also!

So, this hasn't been updated since 2008 but I have to say this has been a fun and interesting ride. Itachi's character is disturbing but so fitting. Gaara, Gaara is terrifying. Does Sasuke know anything about Naruto's past or will he soon be finding out. I want to know! *cries*

Oof what happened to the 25 chapter plan!

On a side note, I love the added touch of Akatsuki members being Itachi's divines. I also love his relationship with them. They're crazy, he's crazier, and they click with me...somehow.

While I agree that Naruto should fight for his rights now that he has willing support, I still believe that Tsunade and Jiraiya went about it the wrong way. They didn't seem to want to help him as a divine or as a person, but as Minato's son who just HAS to do something revolutionary to live up to his father's exploits. And unless they've experienced this form of slavery, they have no reason to assume that Minato has way more reasons to be bitter than Naruto. Him being 'Minato's son' didn't get them to actually try to support him until he was broken in the hospital.

And aside from the comments on their previous behavior, revenge is almost always fun [to read, of course].

Tsunade and Jiraiya...just..just GTFO. He had to come into your rich high class school and get sent to your office for you to get off your asses and consider helping. All this time while he was not in the hospital...when he was full of hope and not Sasuke's divine...just..just GTFO! I just can't. And even if Sasuke was a roadblock they had his whole life to do something...and WTF: Minato's life was worse than yours...he had to build his company up from scratch and he fell in love with a divine and his grandparents didn't support his decisions...I can just SENSE his suffering...like wtf...worse than being a sex slave manipulated and betrayed by your old man's 'friends'...having to create your own company shouldn't have even been mentioned...Minato most likely had a most better childhood or they would've thrown that in Naruto's face by now...They just need to GTFO! And Where The Fuck were they when Minato died and his random ass 'friends' 'helped' Naruto.

And f*cking slap him..[deeply breathes in and out] I wish you would b*tch. Fuck..I hate Minato worshipers. He may have done what he thought was necessary at the time, but his actions don't go excused to the affected party. No matter how you look at it [in canon] he f*cked the boy's life instead of resealing the Kyuubi into Kushina, in hopes that Naruto will save the people of the world [especially if not specifically Konoha] from Madara, and left him to fend as an orphan. Common sense dictates that people are cruel when they are hurting and want to direct their anger.

My second or third reread...I just forget to login. Love your story btw and I apologize for ranting but...

please finish this story. this is amazing

Awww, will you still continue this story? It has been a long time since the last update, but i still have hope! The story is so good and it needs an ending~

omg tsunade and jiraiya were so cruel man it's like as bad as canon expecting naruto to be a better man having kyuubi inside him and all the shit he went through

Will the temporary hiatus ever end? I really love this story!

Canon Itachi's a pacifist so that statement about him enjoying other's pain would technically be false (but this was probably written before it was revealed so oh well).

Interesting idea. I'll see what I feel about the nest few chapters and continue from there.

6 years?! come on! post a chapter already! I’m waiting! and that wasn't two months if that was bad enough!

I really hope you complete this story one day! It is one of the best I've come across.

was anyone else eating jam with toast while reading this :D

I wonder when u will complete this but I hope u will one day cuz I really liked this..I was hunting for some sasuxnaru fanfics and thank god I came across this but then I realized that its not finished and its been years since u updated so yea m sad...anyways i have to say that so many times while reading this fanfic i had this urge to bang sasuke's head really hard to knock some sense into him but unfortunately I can't anyways I hope that one day u realize that u have left this awesome fanfic incomplete and complete it...